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NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 7

Thursday, October 5, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 7: Mal has a moment to reflect on the events of his life...and realizes its not a pretty reflection.

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“Sir, the place’ll be crawlin’ with Feds,” Zoë said, and Mal nodded. They were on the bridge after finally getting off Paquin and setting course for Zargon. Wash had them at full burn, eating up their fuel supply, but it was the only way to get there in a timely manner.

“You know they won’t let us park without searchin’ us,” Zoë went on.

“If they let us park at all,” Wash threw in. He still looked quite unhappy with the situation. Zoë merely seemed resigned.

Mal nodded again, lost in thought.

“Sir, we may want to leave the doc and his sister off somewhere along the way,” Zoë continued, attempting to get something out of Mal besides a nod.

“Yeah, seein’ as how they are fugitives, ” Wash emphasized.

Mal sighed. He was staring at the Cortex, watching yet another news wave from the prison.

“If things are as bad there as they look, we may need the doc,” he said, half to himself.

“Sir,” Zoë objected, “If they search us and find them, we may all end up inmates there ‘stead of just visitors.”

“Yeah, and I already made one more trip there’n I ever wanted to make.” It was Jayne stepping onto the bridge. “I got no intention of becomin’ a permanent resident.”

Mal looked up from the screen long enough to shoot him a dirty look.

“You coulda got off at Paquin.”

“I ain’t gettin’ off on Zargon, that’s for sure,” Jayne groused. “Me, I’m waitin’ on the ship.”

“You’ll do what needs to be done,” Mal told him. Jayne set his jaw and looked away.

“We can hide the doc and his sis in the hold behind the mule and pile crates in front of it,” Mal said. “They ain’t likely to go diggin’ deep—they got better things to do.”

Zoë looked at him like his hair was on fire.

“They’ll run out of air if we’re on that rock any time at all.”

Jayne grinned for the first time all day. “Then it’s a good plan.”

“Why don’t we talk to someo

Comments
Thursday, 05 October 2006 18:55
Ya know...I am seriously hoping the two location scenarios are dopple-shifted accordingly, cuz Alex could be long dead if they aren't:(

Still...loving what you're doing with this, ShinyTrinket! Especially in this chapter, where we get to see into Mal's head about his desire to help Alex, his issues with Inara, his reasoning for sleeping with Nandi and why he's the way he is when it coems to women:D

BEB

P.S. Just in case I got you all confused with "dopple-shifted," it means you're having Alex's portion of the storyline happen about 3 days later than where this part is set. Hopefully;)
Thursday, 05 October 2006 23:59
I'm really worried about Alex here and think having another THREE DAYS before Serenity can even get to the planet is really pushing it, especially as they then have to find her! I am also more than a little disappointed and miffed at the crew for not wanting to go to her aid along with Mal. Maybe it is a stupid heroic thing to want to do but it is the right thing and if any one of them were in that situation they would be more than happy to have someone worry enough to come and look for them. Plus, wasn't Alex their friend too? Ali D
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