Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 5

Wednesday, October 4, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 5: Mal cuts the crew's leave time short and hilarity does not ensue!

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Mutiny was at hand; or so it seemed as Mal tried to take control and make the others see the import of his decision. So far, it was not going well. Wash, Zoë and Jayne stood facing him, arms folded confrontationally. Simon, River and Kaylee were nowhere to be found, and Inara had not yet returned to the ship either.

“I’m sorry about this, but a person’s well-being takes precedence over down time, don’t you think?” Mal was desperately striving to make the others see his point of view.

“Why you gotta be the one to save her?” Jayne demanded.

“Because...I made a promise,” Mal said, somewhat awkwardly.

“Yeah, you promised your crew some time off!” Wash snapped

“I told her if she got into any trouble she couldn’t get out of to ‘wave us,” Mal said.

“Well...why’d ya have to go and do that?” Jayne growled. “She was a payin’ passenger, remember? It was her decision to go to that gorramn moon, wasn’t us decided for her. She knew what she was gettin’ into. I told her day one she was gonna get herself killed. Buhn dahn nurse anyway...”

Mal rubbed his eyes, feeling outnumbered. He looked to Zoë, his right hand for so long. She glanced at Wash and dropped her eyes.

“Zoë?” Mal prompted, hoping at least for her support. I took her a moment to answer.

“Sir, I don’t think we should get involved,” she finally said.

Wash looked smug, and Mal felt even more frustrated.

“Why—“ he began.

“Just ‘cause you bagged her a couple times don’t make her your responsibility!” Jayne cut in.

Mal spun toward him angrily. “She’s my responsibility if I conjure she is—it don’t matter what the reason. And I’ll thank you to keep a civil tongue!”

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Comments
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 09:31
Although I really liked this I wasn't happy that so many of the crew were stone walling the Captain about going to Alex's aid. With Jayne still not happy and refusing to agree does that mean he is getting off and not going with them? Thank goodness for crazy girls and preachers even if the preacher in question added caveats and addendums. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 16:58
Gotta agree with Alison here...really loving where this is going, plot-wise, but...would Zoe really stonewall Mal in this case till she got guilt-tripped by River, Kaylee and Book? I guess deciding how Zoe would swing on a decision is hard, cuz it seems like she backs Mal up 8-9 times out of 10:(

Still...I am glad the crew's on their way to rescue Alex. Though I gotta wonder how Inara's gonna take the news that Mal slept with another woman who ain't her (though it does smell a tad of hypocrisy). I would lay money on a more restrained version of how she reacted in "Heart of Gold" ;)

BEB
Friday, 06 October 2006 17:27
must agree with the masses here...Wash and Zoe are much more people-oriented than "where the hell's my free time"-oriented. i can see Jayne being argumentative, but i'm not so sure anyone else would have said "screw her, she chose that life." they seemed to like her well enough when she was on the ship...

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