Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 4

Tuesday, October 3, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 4: Alex takes the only way out she can find - and it's not pretty.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2429    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimers : Everything belongs to Joss, except for one character of my creation

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Alex scaled the high fence as fast as she could with one good leg. When she got to the roll of wire at the top, she didn’t even hesitate. She grabbed it with both hands, feeling it go through her thick winter gloves like they weren’t even there. She gritted her teeth, and pulled herself up and onto it, intending to swing around and descend the other side.

What she hadn’t counted on was her right leg not cooperating with her plan. She got to the top, balanced on the razor wire, feeling it sinking into the flesh of her hands, arms, and her left leg, which was braced against it as she tried to swing her right leg up and over. Only her right leg wouldn’t swing. She couldn’t move it at all.

Certain the wire must be hitting bone by that time, Alex had only one choice. She hurled herself forward, over the fence and toward the ground on the other side.

The fence was very high, and the ground on the other side sloped away into a deep ravine leading to the woods. Alex hit the ground hard, and tumbled down the hill through the snow, over and over, until she came to rest face down where the ground finally flattened out.

It took her a moment to catch her breath, and then she lifted her head. As soon as she tried to rise, searing pain shot through her hip, and the vomit reflex kicked in again. She pressed the back of a bloody hand to her mouth, retching, but she was empty.

She realized the snow around her was red, and she knew she must be bleeding badly. She looked down at herself. Her gloves, jacket and pant legs were in ribbons from the razor wire, as was the flesh underneath—but there was strangely little pain. Maybe the cold snow was numbing her so she didn’t feel as much.

Her hip, however, was another story. Whereas it had been numb when she first stood on her leg, now it felt like a white-hot poker was stabbing

Comments
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 18:05
Damn...Alex is like a machine! I would be laying in a puddle of my own effluvia after all that;)

BEB
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 22:14
Wow, I am sitting on the edge of my seat and praying that Alex hasn't hidden herself too well for Mal to find when the Big Damn Rescuers come. Just hope she can hold on. This is an excellent story, lots of drama. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 22:49
I like the fact that you've created such a strong, self-reliant woman. Wouldn't mind seein' some retribution toward the animals from chapter one...


"Not as deceiving as a low down dirty... deceiver."

Rob O.
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 01:05
Excellent chapter! I am so happy to see this story continueing!

Most Excellent descriptive writing in this chapter! The details are fantastic, right down to the retching and the razor wire ripping and the buried blade. Great job!

I can't wait to read more!

vaughn

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