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NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART I: Chapter 16

Monday, September 18, 2006

Takes place after "War Stories". Mal is having trouble sleeping after being tortured. A passenger aboard Serenity discovers an old friend - and makes a new one.-------CHAPTER 16: Alex shares with Mal; who finally shares something in return.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2531    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimers : Everything belongs to Joss, except for one character of my creation.

**Mousing over the Chinese should reveal the English translations on most browsers. If not, translations follow the story.

***This installment rated a little stronger for the inclusion of some, um, carnal knowledge. Nothing explicit, probably R-rated at best, but...just know going in!***

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“To Inara!” Mal said, raising his wine glass. “For gettin’ us a decent job that’ll keep us flyin’ for awhile!” The others raised their glasses in the toast, and a chorus of “to Inara” rang out around the table.

“’Course, since ‘Nara ain’t here, somebody has to drink her wine!” Jayne said, pouring a second glass and downing it before anyone had a chance to object.

Supper actually consisted of some real food and fresh produce, since they had gotten paid and paid well. As it turned out, the drop had gone flawlessly, and, now, with fresh food, supplies and fuel on board, they were once again en route to Zargon.

“Inara ‘waved a while ago,” Wash said. “Just wanted to know things went all right.”

“You thanked her profusely, I hope, and told her things was shiny?” Mal asked.

“I did, indeed.” Wash took a large swallow of his wine.

“Everything going well for her?” Mal pressed further.

“She said everything’s great, but she misses us.”

Mal shook his head and grinned.

“Every time I think I should stop dealin’ with her and anyone she knows, she ends up surprising me again. I really thought this job might go south...” he glanced across at Alex as he spoke “...but here we are eatin’ fresh fruit and sittin’ on a big pile of coin.”

Mal looked happier and more relaxed than the crew had seen him in quite awhile. No one was sure if it was the successful job or the sleep he had gotten, but it was a welcome change.

Simon elbowed Alex and leaned close. “Maybe we should toast you for dopin’ him last night,” he said in a whisper. Alex smir

Comments
Tuesday, 19 September 2006 02:10
All righty then. Good breakthrough. Not too explicit. (Oh, my virgin eyes!)

Keep up the good work.


"But she was naked, and all... articulate!"


Rob O.
Tuesday, 19 September 2006 06:25
That, I did not see coming. It was obvious from a while back that there was tension there, but... That I did not see coming.

This is great stuff, I love this series.
More? Please?
Tuesday, 19 September 2006 12:21
BornToFly, I'm happy to see your comment--that was the point, THEY didn't see it coming! I'm glad you got that.
Wednesday, 20 September 2006 01:05
ahhh...finally the tension is broken.

I really like how you worked up to it and also how you got Alex to get Mal into the infirmary. Nice scene.

But I especially love the ending of the chapter. You have really captured the characters!

Wednesday, 20 September 2006 14:46
Finally! I am glad Mal's on his way to recovering from his experiences with Niska...and that the sexual tension between Mal and Alex has come to bear;)

Can't wait to see if Mal takes Alex's advice and starts chatting with Wash about their mutual horrorfest. Probably would do them more than some good:)

BEB
Wednesday, 20 September 2006 23:07
Brilliant! I loved Alex finding the hidey hole with the papers she had hidden away in *her* old Firefly only to find Serenity was one and the same ship. Nice twist. Also love how she handles Mal, not forcing the pace of his recovery but allowing him to do it in his own time and being there every step of the way. Maybe she won't get getting off at that gorram prison planet after all (hope, hope). Ali D :~)
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