Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE VERSE - PART I: Chapter 10

Monday, September 11, 2006

Takes place after "War Stories". Mal is having trouble sleeping after being tortured. A passenger aboard Serenity discovers an old friend - and makes a new one.-------CHAPTER 10: Inara tells Mal what she thinks and the crew plan a job.

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**Mousing over the Chinese should reveal the English translations on most browsers. If not, translations follow the story.

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“Mal, I am so sorry.” Inara looked anxious as she followed Mal through the cargo bay, up the stairs and into the dining area. “I was told it was just transport—I’m sorry to get you into something complicated.”

“Inara, really, it’s no problem,” Mal insisted in his attempt to reassure her. He turned, put both hands on her shoulders, and looked into her eyes. “This is what we do. Why are we still talkin’ about this?”

Inara continued to look worried.

“I know it’s what you do,” she replied. “But, Mal—I misrepresented the situation, and I feel badly about that.”

Mal turned and continued into the kitchen, grabbed a cup and poured himself some coffee.

“You can’t help it your source withheld certain information from you,” he said. “It’ll be fine; we just need to work out the details.”

Inara hesitated, started to say something, then stopped.

“What?” Mal inquired, seeds of impatience beginning to stir.

“Well, I—” Inara hesitated again, then plunged ahead. “I don’t think...Mal, you’re not yourself right now, and I don’t know if it’s a good time for you to take on this job.”

The words came out in a rush, and then Inara stood silent, waiting for the inevitable ornery objection.

It came.

“What...not...whaddya talkin’ about, not myself? I’m...shiny...and any time we need money, which is always, is the right time to take a job!” He snorted and looked away, mumbled something in Chinese, sipped his coffee, and then said, also to himself, “Again, with everybody makin’ a fuss!”

Inara moved around so she was in his line of sight.

“Mal, listen,” she pleaded. “You look exhausted. You’re pale, you’re irritable, and Kaylee says you’re not sleep—”

”Kaylee’s a...I’m puttin’ an ad out for a mechanic and t

Comments
Monday, 11 September 2006 14:36
yay! First post!

I sense some suspense ahead for our BDH's, which no doubt means that violence is going to ensue...I mean seriously, when does a job ever go smooth?

My Lord you are a fast poster, it's like Christmas everytime I log on...
Monday, 11 September 2006 15:22
Still lovin' it. Shiny as can be. Be careful, though. Mal wouldn't be so quick to apologize, at least not so eloquently. Oh, I love seeing you carrying on with River harassing Jayne. Good stuff!



"You don't fix faith. Faith fixes you."

Rob O.
Monday, 11 September 2006 19:07
Very good though I would have expected Inara to be much better at showing her reservations over the job than shouting at the Captain that he looked like crap. Way to go to get his back up and put him on the defensive which I'm guessing wasn't her intention. What happened to her womanly wiles? I don't like the sound of Pearl and worry that the little weasel might be setting them up. After all, Inara only met him in passing at a party - once - but he knows who she is and about Mal, does he know about the rest of the crew? This is very good and getting more and more exciting. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 01:31
This is still good. Like how all the crew is admitting a problem, but I agree, I still don't think Mal would have apologized so quickly. Maybe groused a little more.

Saturday, 16 September 2006 04:01
Oh...the fun that is bound to ensue with the job going sour;)

Definitely says something when Mal is so fuzzed up he'll snap at Kaylee and then apologize to her in the next breath. He needs help before he physically shuts down:(

BEB

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