Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA
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Friday, 08 September 2006 02:00
Oh boy - I am not liking how this is looking for our BDHs and especially Simon and Kaylee. The flashback to what exactly happened was very well done - I love that Simon was acting out of love and fear for Kaylee's safety - *sigh* - handsome and caring ...
Please update soon and don't leave us in suspense!
Please update soon and don't leave us in suspense!
Friday, 08 September 2006 07:53
Oh Yes! I am loving this little series. Only one critisism: You don't post fast enough!
More! and Now!
More! and Now!
Friday, 08 September 2006 11:00
Well sometimes you just have to listen to your muse. If your force it, it can come out all kinds of wrong. Plus I was on like a two week vacation before I posted this lol.
Friday, 08 September 2006 18:40
Good to see someone finally finding Simon and Kaylee. The Alliance tracking the signal was a good touch.
And how did River get shot, anyway?
And how did River get shot, anyway?
Friday, 08 September 2006 21:09
I only touched on it so far but:
"River had known in the second it happened. She’d screamed out her brother’s name, throwing their buyers off. It was only a second of confusion but River had hit the floor, bullet wound in her chest. Gorramn fools thought she was yelling for feds or some such thing. Mal had put bullets to them both."
Basically, when River felt Simon get hurt she freaked, the buyers got nervous and shot her. It will be fleshed out more late though.
"River had known in the second it happened. She’d screamed out her brother’s name, throwing their buyers off. It was only a second of confusion but River had hit the floor, bullet wound in her chest. Gorramn fools thought she was yelling for feds or some such thing. Mal had put bullets to them both."
Basically, when River felt Simon get hurt she freaked, the buyers got nervous and shot her. It will be fleshed out more late though.
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