Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Cut Off

Thursday, August 24, 2006

Angsty piece of Jaylee I wrote to get my muse going. Part of the 30_angsts challeneg. The ship has crashed and Kaylee is trapped in the engine room.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3162    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Fandom: Firefly

Title: Cut Off

Author: Mordsith (Dani)

30_angsts Theme(s): 17. Eto...;Hmmmmm...(~engulf in darkness)

Pairing/Characters: Jayne/Kaylee

Rating: PG-13

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Summary: The ship crashes and the lights go out

Word Count: 999

Author's note: Established J/K. Not betaed. I was feeling kind of angsty and I have had a bit of writers block so I forced this piece out. Not so great, but I needed to try and break through the block.

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Kaylee forced her eyes open, trying to clear the fog out of her mind. The light above the engine room flickered rapidly, making the mechanic cringe. Her head pounded already and the lights going on and off wasn’t helping it. The wires must have been knocked loose. If she could get to the main control box she could stop the flickering. Bracing her hand on the ground she moved to push herself to her feet, a choked out cry escaped her throat instead as blinding pain flooded every nerve in her body. It was an effort to stay conscious.

She slouched back against the engine room wall, trying to work her mind around the pain, figure out what had happened. Everything was a hazy messed and the only thing she knew was that something was very wrong. Something was very wrong.

As her senses became focused once more and her pain returned to a dull throb that echoed throughout her body, she was able to survey her surroundings. The first word that came to mind was crash. That was the only explanation she could come up with for why the engine room was tossed about like it was. Serenity must have crashed. Her tools were strewn everywhere, everything not bolted to the floor was in the wrong place. She could see things from where she was sitting that needed fixing, but fear of more pain kept her rooted in her spot.

There was a commotion outside the engine room making Kaylee rise up as much as she could, to see through the s

Comments
Thursday, 24 August 2006 20:41
Yes, it was angst, but with hope. I like that Jayne was able to keep a cool head and not just barrel on through. He seemed to understand that Simon needed to get his work done first before Jayne could do anything. I also found Kaylee's response to her environment very true to character. Good job.
KAIN1993
Friday, 25 August 2006 00:07
It was a good story
Friday, 25 August 2006 10:54
Cool
Monday, 28 August 2006 16:33
Wow...definitely an angsty moment for the crew. Though I strangely wanna know why Serenity crashed;)

Still...I think you're well on your way to breaking the writer's block, Mordsith;)

BEB
Tuesday, 29 August 2006 21:08
Nicely done.

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