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Sin and Punishment

Saturday, August 19, 2006

Mal, Inara, and Shakespeare.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2650    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title : Sin and Punishment

Author : Goldy

Disclaimer : Joss is boss. Special thanks to Shakespeare, for letting me pull all kinds of his canon out of thin air.

Pairing : Mal/Inara

Summary : They read each other Shakespeare on the second Sunday of every month. Potentially confusing and angsty.

Rating : PG-13

Words : 1, 793

Author’s Notes : Originally written for the livejournal Mal/Inara ficathon, for the prompt "flowers" and "sarcasm." I'm pretty sure the Shakespeare has something to do with agentrouka , but I can't for the life of me remember what.

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They read each other Shakespeare on the second Sunday of every month. Usually they managed an act, more or less. Inara suspected it would take them decades to complete Shakespeare’s entire canon, the rate they were going.

“It’s cause we got all the time in the ’verse, darlin,’ ” Mal claimed. The “one act” rule was really for his benefit, anyway, as Inara suspected he had the attention span of a five-year-old. Two pages in and he’d start poking at her stuff or trying to kiss her neck.

Of course, there were also the days when Inara wondered if “all the time in the ’verse” was too optimistic. Mal lived in a dangerous line of work, and he seemed to attract bullets in the same way a Companion attracted clients—frequently and easily.

In her darkest moments, Inara couldn’t stop the niggling doubt that insisted this was but a snapshot of her life. What place did she truly have, on this ship, tied to one man? One day it would be too much—too many arguments, too much constraint. And she’d have to leave Mal behind again—shattered faith and broken heart.

Inara loved Mal. Maybe too much. Maybe enough to be content for the moment—to give up her clients and to accept that he could never understand the part of her that remained Inara Serra: Companion.

“What the hell kind of insult is ‘I bite my thumb at you’? Lacks punch.”

“Mal, there is really no need for running commentary.”

But Mal

Comments
Saturday, 19 August 2006 02:43
Know how I know that you're not good, you're great? Because your writing only ever improves upon rereading.

All that half-shared doubt and fear co-mingling with the sweetness... it makes me a very happy Rouka. Can't be separated, the fear and the love belong together like they belong to themselves and each other. Their love is an answer to their fears yet only creates new ones. Makes them strong and weak. The poetry of it all. :)

Saturday, 19 August 2006 04:43
Beautiful. You have more than just a handel on Mal and Inara, you have a beautiful sense of language that makes your stories fly.

I really loved it. I love that he's so much inside her already that he can't see it, and it scares her so much, truly loving, that she can't make him see it. I love that they're reading Shakespeare. I love that the truth hurts more than fighting. Really, this was beautiful.
Saturday, 19 August 2006 10:48
'Honesty hurt them more than the fighting ever did' - this is the line that did it for me. Absolutely spot-on and so true it gave me goosebumps. That is Mal and Inara in a nutshell. And so typical that the crew had to stomp along and break the moment at the end. I liked Mal's comment that half of life is avoiding death and Inara's admission that she feared Mal would die without her. Oh yes, I can see them as a piece of Shakespear their own selves. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 19 August 2006 12:11
Great Story. I can just picture Mal's running commentary on Shakespeare and it meakes me laugh. I love to see these two try and work it out.
Saturday, 19 August 2006 16:02
I love the way you write M/I and keep their interplay fresh. The rest of the crew is present but doesn't intrude in this piece and the intellectual banter between M/I is just spot on!

Keep writing!
Saturday, 19 August 2006 16:33
This was great - I love the carefully constructed and conflicted M/I, which is exactly what this is.

Absolutely perfect for the two of them - more please!
Sunday, 20 August 2006 08:42
So many good reviews already, you hardly need another. But I couldn't read this story and not comment. It was so close to being perfect, its truly unfair to the rest of us.
Sunday, 20 August 2006 21:36
That was beautiful. It seems that everyone who writes BDH relationships includes some sort of strife or obstacle, but mostly it's trouble coming from the outside, a job gone wrong or and old enemy resufacing. You did a great job of writing trouble that comes from the inside, which is the kind that hurts all the more. This piece was the image of real relationships, and not something i've seen before in the fanfic. Well done!
Tuesday, 22 August 2006 16:45
You made me all happy and also teary... although that may have something to do with the fact that I've just finished watching the ER episode where Mark Greene dies. Always gets to me.

Anyways... can I have my very own pocket Goldy to sit on my desk and tell me brilliant fanfic at odd hours of the morning when I can't sleep?

Also, did you post this on LJ? I think I might have missed it.
Wednesday, 20 September 2006 03:54
Perfect as always, Goldy. Just perfect.

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