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Goodnight and Goodbye (1/2)

Saturday, December 9, 2006

The Second War of Unification has started. Where does the crew of Serenity go next? Darkish. M/I, various other pairings.

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Title : Goodnight and Goodbye (1/2)

Disclaimer : I am not Joss Whedon, and I do not own Firefly.

Synopsis: The Second War of Unification has started. Where does the crew of Serenity go next? Darkish.

Pairings : Mal/Inara, and hints of Jayne/Kaylee, Simon/Inara, Zoe/Wash, and Simon/Kaylee.

Spoilers : Through the BDM.

Rating : PG

Words : 3, 325

***

Mal doesn’t believe Miranda was the cause of the second war of unification. Just the way of things, is all. Empires don’t last forever—first lesson of history his Ma ever taught him and it’s not a lesson he’ll be forgetting anytime soon.

Some say the Alliance never won the war in the first place, and Mal reckons there’s some sense to that. It’s a big ‘verse, and the Alliance proved time and again they didn’t have the manpower to police every inch of it.

It isn’t Miranda that started the war, but it sure as hell made a rallying cry. Mal can say with certainty that he wasn’t looking to start another war that day. He just wanted the truth.

Still, war it is—burning hulks of bombed buildings in Sihnon and Londinium prove it. Independents are smarter this time around. Causing fear first. Attacking innocents.

Truth is, won’t ever be that same war again, down in the pits of Hera, at Serenity. He likes to think he’s come a way since then—built himself a life.

***

They gather in the galley, the scratching of their chairs against the floor the only noise. Mal studies each of his crew in turn, taking a moment before speaking.

Jayne, staring down into his mug, uncharacteristically silent. Zoe, unsurprised, knowing lines etched into her face. Simon, determined, his calm almost unnerving. Little Kaylee, eyes wide, bottom lip protruding.

“We’re looking at a war,” Mal says, finally, voice too loud in the quiet of the galley.

Only Kaylee reacts. “How can you be sure?” she says, face telling him she’s not ready for things to change, that they can go on, no matter what sort of craziness the ‘verse throws a

Comments
Saturday, 09 December 2006 04:07
Wow. That's some pretty deep and dark stuff you got here. River killing herself, Mal deciding not to fight a second civil war and Browncoats becoming terrorists. You realy know how to grab one's attention.

I'd like to see this second half, and soon.
Saturday, 09 December 2006 04:51
It's a troubling thought to think...but I doubt the opposition to the Alliance that would spring up after the events of the BDM would be all manner of honourably "ideal." Conventional warfare proved inefficient and unsuccessful...so bring on the guerrilla warfare. It's horrific, but I would have to say it's damn prescient to something that Joss would have done with a 3rd or 4th season (whatever season would have come after his season-long exploration of events that got compressed to fit within 2 hours for the movie).

However, what really makes me wonder was what drove River to commit suicide? She was finally free or mostly free of the knowledge about Miranda and the manifestations of the victims' voices (cuz I get the feeling River's brain created the voices she heard of the Miranda settlers from exposure till viewing the message from Dr. Caron) but she eventually kills herself? Hmm...something bigger was afoot:(

BEB
Saturday, 09 December 2006 05:10
A Goldyfic was exactly what I needed tonight!

But this was so sad! I loved the Mal/Inara interaction, and I felt so bad for Kaylee and Simon... *sniff* I could totally see how losing River could destroy their relationship.

Not a Jaylee fan, but in this story it worked and made me smile. I would hate both of them to be alone. And Simon, actually going off to fight? Wow.

I only wish there were a little more Zoe. I'm dying to know what her plans were. And why River killed herself...

So many questions, I think this calls for a sequel. Or a prequel.
Saturday, 09 December 2006 09:33
Wow, this was really well characterized, well written, and gripping.

So many questions, looking forward to the next installment
Saturday, 09 December 2006 09:55
I'm trying to think where I read this before, just as good this time as last but so unbearably sad all the same. Hate the notion of River being dead, of Simon not caring about anything any more and the ship and crew parting company. It's more like a slow death and that is real sad. The only bright spot is that Mal and Inara are together. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 10 December 2006 01:27
Dark, sad and unpredictable...very Joss!

I'm not much of a Jaylee fan, but I
don't see her with Simon for a long term either... I do hope she reconsiders
Mal's offer.

Please post more!! ASAP!!!
Wednesday, 13 December 2006 05:21
Wow ... just wow! That was amazing. I can't imagine Simon going off to fight, but if he truly just doesn't care anymore what difference would it make.

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