Blue Sun Room FICTION - HORROR

Nightmares: Zoe

Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Fifth in the series. It's short, but hopefully effective. Let me know...Zoe isn't the easiest character for me to write.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3504    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Here we go again.

She pokes around her little spot in this darkness expecting to find wooden walls, but instead her 'coffin' has give.

Wait, this is different.

She's had this dream before. Buried alive, dying slowly as the oxygen runs out and the panic sets in, blah, blah, blah. It's almost become as regular an occurence to her as breathing.

Need to conserve my breath.

She doesn't really. She just needs to go through the motions, wake with a jerk, and it will all be over.

But what is that smell?

Suddenly it hits her.

It smells like...

She feels the area around her more carefully, and feels hard bone behind soft flesh. Then her hand comes into contact with what can only be a head of hair.

Oh God, this isn't a coffin around me...these are bodies!

Right on cue, the mass above her begins to press down.

Wake up, Zoe!

But her body doesn't respond, and the weight on her chest increases.

I can't die like this! I won't die like this!

She takes advantage of the little space she has left, and shifts the body above her so that it ends up underneath. Systematically, she begins to claw her way out of the pile. She struggles against the urge to retch as her fingers dig into the rotting flesh around her, and fights to breathe using the small amounts of air filtering through. She goes for what feels like hours...

How many can there be?

She knows that if she's fighting through the remains from the war that she'll be digging her way out for a long time. The thought causes her strength to begin to sap, and her efforts weaken.

I have to keep going!

But despite her brain's encouragement, her body has other plans. Suddenly a hand grabs hers, and pul

Comments
Friday, 14 July 2006 04:42
Oh...now this is fabulous, qwerty! One has to just love the dynamic between Wash and Zoe...especially when an author addresses Wash's seemingly endless compassion for his wife's hidden pains:D

BEB
Wednesday, 26 July 2006 11:32
This is brilliant but I disagree in one tiny respect, I think Wash would want to know what she was having nightmares about because he would want to help her banish them for good. It would hurt him knowing she was being tormented like that. Really good, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 26 July 2006 18:17
I wrote this figuring that Wash does suspect that she's dreaming about the war and its atrocities, but doesn't want to acknowledge it. Much like in "War Stories" when he keeps trying to change the subject when they're talking about the grenades in the apples.

It's nothing he can relate to, so he has no real means of banishing the dreams, only comforting her as best as he can when they occur.
Wednesday, 02 August 2006 22:51
Oh this was really well done. The most poignant moment is the end when Wash just holds her and she relaxes. The last line is very chilling, and very telling.

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