Ten Years Later
Friday, April 25, 2003
Ever wonder what happened to the crew as time went on? Apicture of life on serenity ten years later.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 4277
RATING: 8.0 (G)
SERIES: FIREFLY
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Ten Years Later
by Judy Moffitt
She’d been working on the bridge, calculating different routes for the next leg of the trip after tomorrow’s stop on Persephone. But it was way after midnight now, ship time, and she decided to call it a night. She stopped in the kitchen on the way to bed and found Mal sitting there. He was there most nights and she enjoyed talking to him. Tonight, she had something important to say and it seemed to be the right time.
"Evening River. How are the course calculations coming?"
"Almost done. I’ll have Wash look them over in the morning."
She thought it was nice to have a real job on Serenity as Second Pilot. River was even happier to be mentally stable enough to have a real job. She truly appreciated the effort Simon had made to find a cure for her. Even after three years, she still wasn’t used to being sane all the time. ‘Course she and Mal still had some secrets. He was the only one who knew she still read minds and did other things just with her brain. Even Simon didn’t know or he’d still be trying fix what she didn’t consider to be wrong.
"Day Wash finds a mistake in your calculations is the day I give up Serenity," Mal teased.
She smiled. Mal liked it when he made her smile, she lit up the whole room. And truth to tell, she was so serious most of the time; she didn’t smile nearly often enough.
"Did you know today was ten years to the day since Simon and I came to Serenity? I never really thanked you for taking us in and sheltering us when the Alliance was trying so hard to find me."
"God, has it really been that long? Seems like just yesterday. But so much has happened. Who’d a guessed how it would all turn out.? We’re even respectable most times, nowadays."
"It’s easier now that we aren’t fugitives. Don’t think we can ever thank Book enough for arranging a fake death for us to get the Alliance off our trail." Pause. "Do you remember how beautiful Inara was the day Simon and
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 April 2003 03:48
That was AWESOME hon, you gotta right more. That was great.
Friday, 25 April 2003 17:04
Yow! But very entertaining. I like future stories so much and this is a very original angle. I also really liked the OiS reference and inference. Very slick.
Could we get more details in the future? Different perspectives?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 April 2003 19:34
Interesting angle. But I don't think that Mal would ever fall for River.
Keep it going. Keep flying.
Friday, 25 April 2003 23:24
Ooo, I like it.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 April 2003 00:11
OK Gem, you asked for it. Great story, well written, but I don't like it, you knew I wouldn't. Mal belongs to Inara and visa versa. ;) And in ten years I expect they might even have had a child or two. Sorry, but I'm just a hopeless romantic at heart.
Karen
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 April 2003 00:47
Waah for killing Jayne but it just goes to show what I've always said that he ain't as bad as people think he is. I like the idea of Uncle Mal and here is someone offering him love. After losing Inara he needs someone and if River is happy, I don't think her brother would mind at all.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 26 April 2003 04:35
I like the future view, and appreciated the vision of what the future holds for each of the shipmates. My only complaint is that it goes from Mal saying he'd just recently noticed River was grown up, then with one kiss suggesting they marry at the next stop. We're missing about 3 chapters of more story here! <G> Write write write! :)
Friday, 02 May 2003 11:47
Very shiny Gem ;)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 16 August 2003 08:23
my two fav characters, it ended on such a happy note, even though I was sad to hear about Jayne. Very well done and thought out,
Saturday, 08 November 2003 18:37
Loved this. I would have liked more story though between Mal first noticing how grown up River was to a declaration of wedding bells on Persephone. I don't see Mal as being so impetuous in the heart department. Would have loved to see the development of their feelings played out so we actually got to see them fall in love. Now that would be so shiny. This was still good though and a nice unique perspective of what might come to pass. As for Inara, I do think she and Mal would make a wonderful match if she could ever get over her reticence about owning up to her feelings for him. If she is prepared to just go and leave him like that then she does not deserve him. Like the aftermath in "Hearts of Gold" when she sees Mal coming out of Nandi's bedroom and doing up his shirt. She pretends it's alright and she's happy for him then goes off and bawls her eyes out. That lady needs to take her courage in two hands and just go for what she wants. That way everyone can end up a winner. Thanks again, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 26 April 2004 02:17
The jump from love to marriage is bit fast, but some interesting ideas here (especially on Book). I just don't see Mal and River together, though you did a nice job dealing with the Inara angle.
Monday, 11 June 2007 02:15
Very good, but they'res several things that would never happen. Mal is too much like a father figure to love River that way. Still good though, I thought the imagery was good! Keep em comin!
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