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Looking For Work Part II

Monday, May 3, 2004

Mal, Jayne, Wash, and Zoe are in for a rough time thanks to Atherton Wing. Book and Inara have a plan, but can they get them out in time?

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"Gorram it where are they?! " yelled Kaylee as she sent yet another wave to their wayward shuttle, when it failed to go through she let out a string of curses that a sailor would have been proud of.

"Kaylee... I think you may be spending too much time with Jayne. He seems to be rubbing off on you. What's wrong?" asked Book as he walked onto the bridge.

"They are over an hour late and they aren't answering my waves... Something isn't right. If they were gonna be late the Captain would have let us know." Book looked a little concerned himself.

"Let me see the cortex for a minute." he sat down and after a few seconds had managed to log into an official alliance channel. "No mention of them being captured, or even of the crime being reported. Maybe we should just calm down and see what happens."

"Calm down? They are out there and they might be in trouble... now I know why Wash said he felt sorry for me when Jayne and I got together... This must be how he feels each time Zoe is out there... What if..." She looked about ready to completely break down.

"Now, now it's going to be alright. After all they are all together, and they can take care of themselves. They probably ran into a situation, but they'll deal with it." He put a hand on her shoulder. "You haven't slept in two days... The ship is working again, and you aren't going to be any good to him if you can't stay awake. Get some rest, I'll stay here and keep trying to make contact and find out what happened ok?" Kaylee hesitated for a minute as she wiped some tears away from her face.

"Okay... but if you hear anything at all..."

"You'll be the first to know I promise. Get some rest." Kaylee left the bridge groggily, once she was gone the confidence left Book's face. This didn't look good at all, if it was the alliance there would be procedures and possible loop holes to help them. It looked more likely to him that the Captain and the others had been taken in an unofficial manner. He started typing on the cortex as he went through various secret cont

Comments
Monday, 03 May 2004 22:56
Ahhhh! You can't leave it there! You sure you aren't related to Atherton and Niska???? Can't wait to see what happens next, no way would Atherton kill Mal off that quickly - maybe he could the part in the bible about kneecaps. Wonder what Book and Simon are planning. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 03 May 2004 23:18
Interesting that River promised not to leave the ship, somehow though I think Simon might regret not specifying that the ship stay in place too:) hehehe. This looks really good, eager to see what happens
Tuesday, 04 May 2004 03:44
Sorry, Amdobell I couldn't think of a good way to end this part so i figured why not kill Mal and then in part III i'm gonna get rid of the rest of the crew bruhahahha.

Nah just thought why not go out on the cliffhanger. Hopefully i'll get part III done faster than Part II. Shouldn't take as long since it's basically my concluding chapter and I know what I want to happen. Hopefully by friday.

I'm trying to figure out if I want to do another fic or two before I get back to River/Reaver guy stuff.

Tuesday, 04 May 2004 03:47
Thanks Jebby,

I feel kind of bad about Part II since I hit a mental road block about how to describe different parts of what was going on. I felt like I took the cheap way out to just get it done and move on to part III. Maybe i'll do a rewrite this weekend.

I'm hoping to pick up the action a bit in Part III. This one was a little light on it since I think only Jayne, and Zoe had any combat sequences. Yeah I guess Simon should have been more specific, but... I mean it's Simon when does he ever say what he's suppossed to say hehehe.
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Friday, 15 July 2005 14:35
I have just found 'Firefly' - poor me, I know! - and am still new to the fan fiction part but this was brilliant! Brilliant writing, characterisation and build-up of suspense.

Thank you. :-)

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