Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

It never ends

Tuesday, April 6, 2004

The crew of Serenity survived the reaver attack and managed to limp to saftey, at Rutledge Fuel Station. Where the past catches up to them.

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Serenity was docked at the Rutledge fuel station, the ship had taken a lot of damage in the attack and they were lucky that Rutledge was close by. It was cheap, small, and out of the way. That meant Mal could risk a week or two if necessary to make repairs without worrying about getting any serious Alliance attention or risking anyone else stumbling across his crew.

"You were hit by Reaver's?" asked the dock owner as he looked at the damage from the grappler.

"Yeah, we were lucky though. No fatalities and only a few serious injuries." said Mal.

"Damn Reaver's are all over the place now. Yours is the 10th ship I've heard of this month been hit. First with any survivors though."

"So how much to repair the hull?" asked Mal a bit impatiently.

"Not too big so I figure 40 plat."

"Done, how long ya reckon it'll take?"

"At least a week I've got 6 ships ahead of yours. We'll get ya done as fast as we can."

Mal nodded and walked off to find Kaylee. He knew the hull repairs would slow him down, but at least with Kaylee they'd be able to keep the engine repairs cheap and get them done quickly.

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"They've got everything we need here Captain." said Kaylee. " but it will still take me a few days or so to get our girl back in the sky."

"A few days? You must be slipping, or maybe your distracted." grinned Mal.

"Hey it ain't that… it's just they did a lot of damage to the engine… and unless you don't want it working right the next time we get in a pinch."

"Calm down Calm down." said Mal. "I was only kidding. The hull's gonna take at least that long so take your time. How's Jayne doing I ain't had time to check in since we docked?"

"Better Simon says he'll be back on his feet soon, but that he should still take it easy. Jayne's getting

Comments
Tuesday, 06 April 2004 18:13
This is probably going to be a multi part fic. I wasn't going to, but I realized I wasn't half done and I had double the length of my last story. I've probably got enough written already to release up to a third part, but I want to go through them and make sure they flow ok.

I wanted to try and write a sequel to Breaking even, but I wanted to get it away from Jayne. The last fic was really all about him, and while he's my favorite char on the show it isn't all about him. So fanfics about it probably shouldn't be either. Anyway undoutedly I've made alot of grammar errors, but I wanted to get part of this up today. When I get home I'll read through again and look to make some corrections.

Any adivce or comments are more than welcome.
Wednesday, 07 April 2004 14:03
Great job. Interested to see where you take it next. The image of River and Kaylee wrestling the weights away from Jayne really gave me a laugh!
Wednesday, 07 April 2004 17:39
Thanks, I wanted to make sure there we're enough laughs and action in Part I to justify reading Part II. I'm enjoying writing this, but I'm still struggling to get a few of the charecters down, at least I think so. Zoe and Simon seem to give me the most trouble, but I thought the Simon and Inara part went off in at least a semi-Simon fashion. I'm going to rewatch a few episodes to try and get Zoe down... writing her confuses me. Anyway I hope ya like Part II.

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