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THE JOB (Part III)

Saturday, April 12, 2003

Zoe tells the crew about the job andwhy Mal is upset.

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THE JOB (Part III)

Zoe looked over the group sitting at the table and stopped at River. "You OK now?"

"He hurts so bad,." she replied.

Zoe’s mothering instincts made her want to hold River and tell her it would be OK. But she had a job to do first; she’d promised Mal. And anyway, it wasn’t gonna be OK as far as she could see. "I know River," she said quietly.

This exchange made everyone focus on Zoe. Obviously something was up and Zoe and River both knew something bad. The room was suddenly filled with tension. There was a long silence as Zoe tried to find the words.

Kaylee broke the silence first. "Where’s the captain? Ain’t he gonna eat dinner?"

"He’s not hungry and I need to talk to you all about the reason for that." This was going to be harder than she thought. She glanced down as Wash sitting beside her. He caught the pain in her eyes and grabbed her hand.

"Honey, what’s wrong?"

God, how she loved this man. It was good to see the concern on his face. Good to know he would be there for her anytime she needed him. And she surely needed him right this minute. She squeezed his hand to reassure him.

"Mal has arranged our next job. I think it’s legitimate work this time. He wasn’t really clear on the details though. Just said we’d be hauling goods to Shadow."

They all looked at each other confused. Shadow was considered to be a prime location and legitimate work wasn’t usually dangerous, so what was wrong?

Tears started running down River’s face. Inara saw it first and reached out to hold her. "What’s wrong with the job, Zoe?" she asked quietly.

"Ain’t the job so much that’s wrong. It’s the location. Mal would never have gone there if we didn’t need the money so bad." Kaylee remembered the long list of needed parts she gave Mal three day ago and hung her head. She w

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 April 2003 00:34
Well done Gem, you really are capturing each of the characters. Keep the story coming I'm looking forward to more.

Karen
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 April 2003 02:02
You work fast but the story stays on track well. I like a story that grabs your attention quick and holds it. Now that you have my attention can I have more story?
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 April 2003 03:10
The pain was palpable that it hurt to read. But the crew of Serenity is strong and they will survive this brush with the dark and Mal's past. You can't hide from the past, only hope to survive it. This made Mal stronger and he will survive this again.
Saturday, 12 April 2003 04:31
That was quick! The bit with Book really got my attention.
Saturday, 12 April 2003 05:55
xiexie, this was another good snippit. I got the chills.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 April 2003 20:45
Sorry to detract from the story but will Firefly be put out on VHS? I mean for those of us who are DVD challenged.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 14 April 2003 21:33
Durn Girl! You made me cry!
Tuesday, 15 April 2003 18:14
<<The pain was palpable that it hurt to read.>> That is true.

<<Durn Girl! You made me cry!>> I'm at work, I can't cry right now, but I did.

Very well done. You are doing a great job!

Thank you.
Tuesday, 15 April 2003 18:17
<< the pain was palpable that it hurt to read.>> That is true.

<<Durn Girl! You made me cry!>> I'm at work, I can't cry right now, but I did.

Is there a way to edit a comment? it seems what I pasted did not stay.

Just wanted to clarify.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 16 August 2003 08:07
truly well done. The revelation of Mal's past was done well and the reactions of the crew seem really believable. Please continue

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