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POSTED BY: jossisagod
UPDATED: Tuesday, June 5, 2007 06:27
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Leave my thread heathen.
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Dude! I'm So high right now.
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Originally posted by ShadowFLY:
Dude! I'm So high right now.
This makes me wonder what Shadow's deep-seated insecurity is that makes him have to insult others to feel good about himself? I mean, I can't help but notice that he didn't post a pic over in the other thread...
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I wish I had a magical wish-granting plank.
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Originally posted by ShadowFLY:
Leave my thread heathen.
Wow...and you call Citizen pompous...
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Originally posted by Causal:Quote:
Originally posted by ShadowFLY:
Dude! I'm So high right now.
This makes me wonder what Shadow's deep-seated insecurity is that makes him have to insult others to feel good about himself? I mean, I can't help but notice that he didn't post a pic over in the other thread...
No insecurities here boy, now why don't you take your high and mighty self out of my thread. Don't let the door hit your GI Joe ass on the way out.
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there was a problem with the rhythm there, always say for a good insult, the rhythm has to be spot on.
So if you drag out the dude (use a few extra 'u' letters there) and just slightly adjust the wording, it makes it so much better
say, 'Duuude, i'm like, so high right now...'
the 'like' just gives it that extra syllable, and the puncutaion improves the readers ability to read it how you intended. oh, and no exclaimation mark, the last thing you will get out of stoners is an exclaimation.
There, see? this could be fun, now you try.
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Take your pineapple-eating ass out of my thread heathen.
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oh, and there were so many things wrong with Leave my thread heathen, I think its best if you just start again from scratch. I mean, even 'Be gone!' (yes, here you can use the exclaimation mark) would have been an improvement.
But all in all its hackneyed and has no style.
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Originally posted by ShadowFLY:
Take your pineapple-eating ass out of my thread heathen.
Now thats more spirited! well done. But aim for more originality, and don't forget your rhythm!
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