Destiny, Episode 10: Forbidden Planet

POSTED BY: NEEDY
UPDATED: Thursday, May 18, 2006 20:07
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AMYLISAI

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 5:23 AM

Wow, looks like we're hanging out at fireflyfans.net at the same time (now how could that possibly happen to us?)
Sure, if you've got your stuff saved anyway, that could save me a lot of time. Unless there's other peoples responses to your posts that make part of the story, then I should do a search for "Amy" or "Flechette" and tab through to read our parts :) What do you think is best?

Cheers, Amy

SAFEAT2ND

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 5:28 AM

The Serei-Tree thread is always fun to read. Some stuff is... a bit out there, but there is lots of talent there too. Have a look. If it gets to be too much PM me and I'll send you the condensed version. I've saved everthing I wrote on the Boros adventure. I've saved the pertinant responses too.

I'm thinking of turning it into a fanfic. A friend of mine wants me to put it into book form.

Safeat2nd, Chief Handyman of Destiny

SAFEAT2ND

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 5:32 AM

It's good to hear from you again Amy, but I really must be off to bed. Any questions feel free to PM me.

Safeat2nd, Chief Handyman of Destiny

NEEDY

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 6:32 PM

Safe, you should sooo turn the Boros story into a fic - its great stuff

If you'd like, you could even go back, and change little bits you didn't like or add some bits to it - "The Director's Cut"... or alternatively "The George Lucas Inspired Tinkering Cut" Though the latter is a bit long-winded

I've just read your latest two entries and they're fantastic - I loved the first post where Jack and Safe parted ways and got a good laugh from this part in the second post:

Quote:

Lightsabres? Safe thinks surprised, I thought they were banned a Long Long Time Ago.

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Needy. Male Companion a.k.a. First Boy Whore of Destiny
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www.myspace.com/needsalt

CALLMESERENITY

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 6:36 PM

Yeah, that was very funny! Safe is so creative!

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*And since she has nothing better to do till Jazaf and Needy return with their supplies, Serenity cleans are reloads her other gun.*

Serenity, First Officer of Destiny
President of the Juggled Gosling Chatroom

I have a live journal: http://www.livejournal.com/users/callmeserenity/

SAFEAT2ND

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 6:40 PM

Thanks Needy and Serenity!! I was going to add In A Galaxy Far Far Away, but figure that was too over the top.

And the Safe and Jack parting ways was done on my buddy's wife's(versereader) insistance. She felt that the original was too rushed and needed proper closure.

She was upset Safe "left Amy behind"
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"Milk hunh? Isn't that what they feed babies?"

Safe takes another swing from the bottle swishing it around in his mouth to wash out the taste before swallowing.

Safeat2nd, Chief Handyman of Destiny

NEEDY

Wednesday, March 8, 2006 6:49 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by safeat2nd:
Thanks Needy and Serenity!! I was going to add In A Galaxy Far Far Away, but figure that was too over the top.

Maybe, but I would have liked it. I mean there are lightsabres and all sorts of other things going on at the Tree - I don't think your description would qualify as going over the top. But still, it works with or without

As for leaving Amy behind - its true its sad, but who's to say he won't see her again - see them all again?

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Needy. Male Companion a.k.a. First Boy Whore of Destiny
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www.myspace.com/needsalt

WILDIGSTART

Thursday, March 9, 2006 3:18 AM

*Willie pauses just before entering, her eyes brightly shining. She turns to Jazaf and smiles*

She's just so mêilì...lìngrén jingyì...I mean...sigh...I can't wait to see inside her.

*she loops her arm with his and begins her tour*

You see? She's not a junkie or mentally ill, she's gifted!--Momma Roxy

AMYLISAI

Friday, March 10, 2006 4:25 AM

Oh no! Spoilers! I just logged on so I could go read Safe's stories (with me in them, I must admit that peaked my interest) and lo! a spoiler! I get left behind. 'Course George Bush has been doing that to lots of kids for years... so why should I be special?

As Willie enters the ship, the tour begins. On the walls of the cargo bay she spies the "museum" to adventures past (tastefully framed and hung by the female members of the crew)--a jar of foam, a framed piece of Kimmel clone 2000, the cremated remains of crewmembers past, a party hat...

Amylisai, Chopstick Ninja Queen O'Fancy Garb (and lovin her time on Destiny!)

AMYLISAI

Friday, March 10, 2006 4:54 AM

Wow, well my foray into the SereniTree just made me all the more eager to read Needy's and Safe's fiction. I can see how you both have improved as writers over the last few months (gosh, this crew has probably been hanging out together for about six months now!).
I flipped through the Boros adventure and caught a lot of the highlights, but I read it all out of order going from one thread to the next. I would LOVE to read it through straight and really see the story as it's supposed to be. I can tell that the characters really come to be close and I'd like to see that happen (as well as reading more about the shiny exciting adventures!). Can you gents please send me your docs? My email address is
amylisai@gmail.com
I look forward to it very much. And as the daughter of a published novelist, I promise to give feedback. Can't wait to read. Thanks!

Amy, good with a namebadge?

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