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Leaps of Faith - 20

Monday, May 1, 2006

Simon and River find themselves in harm’s way. Help comes from an unlikely source.

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Thanks: To Jacqui, Josh and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.

Rating: PG-17, violence

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Set after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and the crew has been through a rough stretch. Click on my name to read the backstory. They’re all backstory.

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Leaps of Faith

Chapter Twenty

At his sister’s cry, the doctor turns to see what has so alarmed her. The opening to the alley has been blocked by a trio of street thugs. Rough and cocky, they are dressed in dirty, garish, cast off clothing and it’s obvious they aren’t a welcoming party.

Before Simon can react, two of the thugs grab his arms and wrench them up behind him as the third shifts past to slip an arm around River’s throat and muffle her mouth with his hand. Her head flings back and her eyes are wide with terror.

Simon struggles but risks dislocating his shoulders if he continues. The biggest of the gang, a greasy, heavy-set sort, sneers, “Well, well, now – lookit wha’ we got us here. Looks like a couple a fancy folk.” He smiles an ugly smile and licks his lips lewdly at River. “Whazza matter, love. ‘E too cheap ta take you sommers comfy afore he tups ya?”

“Shut your filthy mouth, you shiong-muh duh duang-ren, and let us go! She’s my sister, you piece of go se!” Simon jerks and strains against the thugs.

“Shaddup, you rich bastard.“ Greasy slugs the doctor hard in the mouth. The blow knocks Simon’s head back, splitting his lip and splattering his shirt with a bright gush of blood. River thrashes against her captor, her screams stifled by the thug behind her.

Greasy paws through Simon’s pockets, stuffing the contents into his

Comments
Monday, 01 May 2006 02:40
The more I read this story the more I love it. Keep writing!!
Monday, 01 May 2006 02:43
Hee! Jayne! You big ole softie!
Monday, 01 May 2006 04:00
Perfect! I love how, even in times of stress, River teases Simon. The bond they share is dear and you captured it nicely. Still leaving room for River and Jayne to appreciate each other.
Monday, 01 May 2006 09:45
Great chapter hisgoodgirl!

Jayne laying out the thug with a whiskey bottle, how appropriate!

I love River's remark about the teeth and Jayne's lecture about the doctor's clothes.

More, more....please?
Monday, 01 May 2006 18:45
Jayne to the rescue! That's as it should be. Keep it up! D
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 03:53
It's a wonderful image you've conjured of Jayne. Cane in one hand, whiskey bottle in the other, and still managing to come to the Tam's rescue. I could see it all quite clearly in my head.

And I truly love the fact that you haven't downplayed his ingrained mercenary streak - going through that hoodlum's pockets was perfectly in character.

More Jaylee next chapter?
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 18:52
I agree with Cantonheroine, wanting more Jaylee soon... please....having withdrawal symptoms.

Love that it was Jayne who rescued Simon and River, even injured he is still the most manly-man in town!
Friday, 07 July 2006 12:07
now if that don't bring kaylee a-runnin' i don't know what will.

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Tuesday, 12 December 2006 11:55
Simon is such a boob.

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