Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

In Sunshine and in Shadow Part Four

Saturday, April 29, 2006

Mal brings his people to Whitefall, into a situation which looks darker and nastier than before.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2352    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This episode has turned into a bit of a monster, but I wanted to get them to a certain place and it took more words than I expected, so my apologies it does go on a bit.

The Firefly characters are someone else’s property, I am not getting paid for this.

All reviews welcome

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In Sunshine and in Shadow Part 4

“There’s blood on my dress, there’s blood on my dress! Oh God NO! GET IT OFF! GET IT OFF!”

Then:

Simon moving with a speed and grace to rival his sister, leaping up onto the mule.

“River move your hands!”

Then:

River holding both hands up to her face looking with wonder at the blood glistening in the cargo bay lights.

Then:

Al on the stretcher eyes rolled back in her head.

Then:

Inara setting out medical supplies in a glorious robe of red and gold.

Then:

A string of cuss words in English, Welsh and Chinese.

Then:

Then:

Then:

Then… becomes… now.

Mal woke up with a start, his head resting on one arm his fingers crocked round a stone cold cup of Coffee.

He groaned as he sat up, bones clicking, muscles twanging and went through that confused period that comes from waking up somewhere other than your own bed.

“Sir?”

“Zoe?” Mal rubbed his face, he needed a shave.

“It’s morning sir, sun’s up, Owen’s gone. Doc strapped him up good, gave him some meds for the pain. He asked me to tell you that he’s sorry, they were bigger ‘gwirionyn’ than he thought and if they weren’t dead he’d ‘have rutting’ killed them… Oh and to keep your head down on Whitefall and maybe he’ll see you there.” Zoë pulled a small purse out of her pocket and threw it to Mal. “Owen got Jayne to empty their pockets before he buried them said to take the coin to help pay for the repairs.”

“Mighty generous of him, Al still alive?”

“She is and likely to remain so, bullet was a through and through, hit her in the left of her back and went through at an angle, one of the bastards must have got her while she was turning the Mule. You missed Ri

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 29 April 2006 16:34
Just a minor quibble...it's rotgut whiskey, not gut rot. Otherwise I'm enjoying it greatly.
Sunday, 30 April 2006 06:53
Ahttp://www....don't make the Welshman a baddie (even a minor one):(

Still...I am mightly interested to find out what kind of shape the sherriff's in: Gene Wilder in Blazing Saddles drunkard or something worse....

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 07:25
I'm loving this...:), Keep up the good work.
ATHOS1029
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 13:30
Still Rockin
Nice take on the Character of Bull though making agnes wiry might have worked better than fat.
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 14:33
Wow! You really know how to ground your readers right there in the middle of the dust and the male whores! Never was one for Westerns before I watched Firefly but you make me want to sit down and watch them all till I get all the references!
Wednesday, 05 July 2006 20:20
agree with BEB: don't make owen mean, please?
just out of curiousity, what was the second thing to hit them?

b

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