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Rivers Key (part 4/?)

Monday, April 24, 2006

River snapped out of the trance at the bar when Jayne grabbed her.
Inara comes back and we're going to haven.

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TITLE: Rivers Key (Part 4/?)

AUTHOR: YmeT

RATING: PG13 (at the moment)

PAIRING: Jayne/River

SUMMARY: AU Something else snaps river out of her assassin mode in the bar.

DISCLAIMER: Joss is a genus… But I am his muse so I think I can claim credit too don’t you?

Don’t own anything and not plagiarising but a lot is the same as the movie because I’m going Au half way and wanted the backup.

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Man; Mal can be such and Idiot. Him and Simon both. What is with the men on this ship? Jayne wondered to himself.

They had been watching the wave between Inara and Mal and seriously; those two gave men a bad rep. I mean there’s Mal and Inara, it’s a fact them being in love. A fact everyone but Mal sees. Then theres Kaylee, makin’ sweet doe eyes at the Doc boy, who’s actin’ like he don’t see it, but still goin’ beet when she talks to him.

Now Mal was ridding to the rescue when Inara probably didn’t need rescuing at all.

It was Damn sure if he ever fell in love he’d know it, and he wouldn’t mess about denying it and hiding his feelings and shit. Although he didn’t know much about it. His only recent experience being with whores and the like.

But at the time that was better. He wasn’t ready to settle down then. And that never sat very well with most women. Wait did that mean he was ready to settle down now? No, of course not! I mean it wasn’t as if there was someone he was in love with right?

He stuck his head into Rivers room to check on her and found her sitting with her legs crossed like she was meditating with her drawing pad balanced on one knee. She looked up at him and smiled and motioned him into the room.

“How you doin?” he asked shuffling and stuffing his hands in his pockets, still standing in the doorway.

“Better, do you want to sit down?” She smiled up at him again and fluttered her drawing hand at the other end of the bed. He stepped further into the room and sat on the e

Comments
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 20:59
Well now....been missing this little story a bit;)

Not a bad little chapter here, Yme...though a bit too rapid overall. The story seems to bounce around between the scenes (though if you''re intending to leave out the major scenes that don't get altered in your AU slant on the BDM, then things make a bit more sense). Maybe try to bring in the unchanged moments a bit more, if only in passing reference....

And if you need a beta reader, I would be happy to assist:) Just drop me a line through my profile's message box (top left hand side of profile screen after clicking my user name).

BEB
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 03:00
Why'd you wait so long for this installment? Reading this is really fun... it's like watching the movie again, but with some connections I would have loved to see actually being made (namely between River and Jayne).

Just don't take so long for the next installment!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 06 May 2006 05:00
Ohmigod, I just discovered this fic, and it's awesome!! You're still writing, right? 8)
YME
Thursday, 18 May 2006 17:13
I am still writing guys. Please be patient. My life is a bit screwy at the minute so I'm waiting out my exams and then I'm all yours.
love all the feedback. feel free to keep it coming.

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