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Rivers Key (Part 3/?)

Sunday, March 19, 2006

River snapped out of her programing at the bar when Jayne grabbed her. This is everones reactions. BDM spoliers AU. Next part, some song fic.

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TITLE: Rivers Key (Part 3/?)

AUTHOR: YmeT

RATING: PG13 (at the moment)

PAIRING: Jayne/River

SUMMARY: AU Something else snaps river out of her assassin mode in the bar.

DISCLAIMER: Joss is a God. (no blasfamy intended)

Don’t own anything, its all his amazing creation. Not plagerising but a lot is the same as the movie because I’m going Au half way and wanted the backup.

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The boat touched down on Haven before nightfall setting Serenity down in a mine shaft so as not to be overly noticeable. Shepherd was there to greet them all as they piled off the boat.

River was sneaking along behind them and peeking into the cargo bay As they all said their hellos and grabbed whatever they were taking down to the settlement with them for the night.

As everyone headed after Shepard out of the mine and down to the settlement River saw Simon trailing after Kaylee and felt the love he had for the sweet engineer suddenly bubble up when he saw her scoop a young boy up into her arms like he was precious.

She wanted to hit him when his thoughts turned back to her and he started to feel guilty for what he really wanted. Stupid Simon, he would see soon that she didn’t need him to look after her anymore.

She had Jayne now. He would look after her and when he couldn’t she would be able to look after herself soon.

Just when everyone was off the ramp, Jayne turned back and took 2 steps up into the cargo bay,

“You comin with us or are you gona hide up here all night?” he grunted.

River peeked out again and grinned at him.

“Can I stay with you?” she asked cautiously, half of her still expecting him to say no and tell her to get lost.

Jayne glanced down at her feet and huffed,

“If’in your coming with me you had better get some boots on ya pretty sharpish. I’m not hanging about here all night waiting for you.”

River stepped out from behind the container she had been hiding behind and revealed her black boots in her hand.

“Knew you would say that. Help me.” She ordere

Comments
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Sunday, 19 March 2006 03:19
I had actually thought of Jayne and River as a couple. But i could never really picture it. I think you did a good job.
Sunday, 19 March 2006 11:07
The songs fit both the characters really well. I like how your story is moving along.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 06:17
You did great keeping them both in character and still showing the gentle side. Keep writing, can't wait to see what comes next.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 04:21
I'm sort of a new comer to this site, and fresh from watching the series and the movie. Some of what I've read I couldn't really fit in with the characters, but this is something I could actually believe. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Monday, 24 April 2006 18:04
aaw!! *huggles fic* i love it!!! the nail is so hit!!! the nail is in the wood, through the wood and out the other side, it is so hit!!!

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YME
Monday, 24 April 2006 19:21
I'm glad you liked it.
Sorry i havent had a chance to update. I got a new job and it took a while to get settled.
I have a busy few weeks with exams etc coming up so i hope to get some of it up soon.
Thanks for all the love you guys. you keep me going.

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