Rivers Key (Part 2/?)
Sunday, March 12, 2006
River snapped out of her programing at the bar when Jayne grabbed her. This is everones reactions. BDM spoliers AU.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2508 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
TITLE: Rivers Key (Part 2/?)
AUTHOR: YmeT
RATING: PG13 (at the moment)
PAIRING: Jayne/River
SUMMARY: AU Something else snaps river out of her assassin mode in the bar.
DISCLAIMER: Joss is a genus… But I am his muse so I think I can claim credit too don’t you?
Don’t own anything and not plagerising but a lot is the same as the movie because I’m going Au half way and wanted the backup.
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Back on the ship everyone is gathered around the mess hall table, Jayne is sittin in one of the chairs, oddly enough, with River curled up in his lap with her arms wrapped tight around his neck, her head in his shoulder still crying and mumbling that is wasn’t her and some other nonsense.
Simon kept trying to get near her to check her over, she had a bunch of cuts and bruises all over. Every time he got close she would climb further into Jayne’s lap, not something that really seemed possible at this point, and start crying and mumbling again. “Maybe I should give her a smoother or something?”” he asked and the crying turned to whimpers and the death hold that would be chocking a smaller man tightened further.
“No,” Jayne growled. “Don’t you think that there’s been enough go se put into her system? She’s had enough poking to do 30 people.” Simon started guiltily, and backed off.
Mal was confused and worried, which added up to a pissy mood so he was about ready to crack. “What in the hell happened back there?” he asked Simon, his face showing nothing but anger.
“Do we know, was anyone killed?” Zoe asked “It’s likely” Mal says, “So again Doc, What, in the Hell, Happened back there?”
Simon glanced warily at the surrounded table, resting on River and Jayne.
“The people who helped me get River out had intel that said she was being imbedded with behavioural conditioning, they gave me a safe word that will put her to sleep if something happened. I never asked what kind of something they were talking about. I brought her out here so that they couldn’t get to her.”
Mal was fuming. He wanted
Glad its going down well.
I have part 3 done but i think i'll hold off for a bit because it could be a few days before i get a chance to do much more and i prefere to give regular updates.
I decided that i didnt like Simon messing with river medically so yea Jayne is all growly about it.
I have a feeling its going to take me a while to get through the movie before i get to really let loose. I decided to follow the basics of the movie so you may notice that i skip bits as i go along. thats basically cause i dont ahve any changes to make and those scenes will be the same.
thanks for the review and i look forward to more. Please let me know what you think guys.
Thanks, Yme, for a new take on the BDM. It's like having new episodes to watch again. Space 'em out regularly, won't you? Maybe once a week??!! Pretty please!!
I like the way that Jayne calms River down and keeps her settled, and ditto about the bit above about Jayne keeping the Doc from medicating River - so River has a chance to be herself - with Jayne's calming influence on her, too!!
Yea to River and Jayne!!! ;)
Yea I figured there would be a few mistakes, my sister is supposed to be my beta but i have this patience problem, in that i dont have any. hehe.
so i couldnt wait to put up the 2nd chapter when i had it done.
Please keep the reviews. I love them and they feed my muse.
“Why the hell not? I’m already being used as a gorram easy chair why shouldn’t I be a damn Nurse too.” Jayne grumbled as they all left the room.
Love that line, Jayne trying to hide his softer side as usual.
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