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Scar Petals - Chapter 4

Monday, April 24, 2006

Kate can't cope and has to run from The Kestrel, Hoban Washburne is still on board her ship, and there's a little private party in one corner of the bar...

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Chapter 4

Kate sits alone in the bar, in one of the darker corners, one hand curled round a smeary cup of some godawful liquor, the other cradling her head. It doesn’t hurt; just feels way heavy. She thinks about unpinning the thick red braid that she’s got coiled round her head, but she’d only have to do it up again later. It probably wasn’t very professional, scooting off to the nearest bar when they docked, but she’d had to get out. He’d called her Mal. She’d had to get out.

She thinks back to the medi-bay and shuts her eyes. No matter what Sallie had done, Hoban Washburne just wouldn’t let go of that gorram dinosaur toy. The T-Rex. Lucky it wasn’t the triceratops; its horns and spiky bits would have cut into his hand like, well, like a Reaver. She shudders and takes a swig of the foul spirits, spiced with nutmeg or something equally revolting.

There’s a party over in one corner of the bar. Or something very like a party. There’s a preppy-looking guy standing up, soused out of his mind, trying to get a young girl’s attention, but she’s listening to something one of the other men has said. An older man. A handsome man he is, kinda, but with a few rough edges. A beautiful woman, who’s wearing the most beautiful dress Kate’s ever seen, keeps making sarcastic-type faces, but her eyes keep sliding to the handsome man when he ain’t looking. Kate smiles in spite of herself.

She wonders what’s happening back on board the Kestrel. She hopes the crew don’t see her as some kind of moonbrain, walking out like that. She’d bolted from the medi-lab, grabbed her brother’s coat – her coat – and just escaped. Tom, at least, will understand; he’s had to escape a few things in his time. Maybe they’ll all just think it’s because of Stuart and Kerry dying. Tell the truth, she isn’t quite sure what it is, anyway.

Sallie’s a damn good doctor, Kate thinks, taking another mouthful of the terrible hooch, then rubbing her hand over her eyes. After he’d spoken her name, that Hoban Washburne, he’d gone into some kinda se

Comments
Monday, 24 April 2006 23:32
Been looking forward to this for along time! Well worth it! Can't wait to read more!
You got the characters really well.
Hope it works out ok for eveyone though.
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 00:11
Come on, let them find out who each other is!!! God, and Wash is like RIGHT THERE and Zoe's all sad? oh, this is too hard. Write really fast!!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 00:17
This was absolutely amazing and touching. You are my GODDESS. Keep them coming...did I mention how great this was. (scrolls up to read it again)
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 00:25
I'm really enjoying this series. Your characterizations are great, and I loved Kate's observations of Serenity's crew. More please!
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 03:59
This was great, full of vivid descriptions and angst! They were all right there, and I could just envision their little group. And the way you describe Kate and her pain. And how she keeps seeing blue eyes instead of brown. That's foreboding of some complications!

keep writing!
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 04:26
Yep...gotta back squish here....if Kate's tripping on Wash's blue peepers, I get the feeling you have some angsty stuff ahead for Wash, Kate, the crew of the Kestrel and the BDHs;)

Can't wait for more:)

BEB
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 17:24
Angsty stuff?? Complications? Me??

I couldnt possibly comment!

I want to know whose Goddess I am, though *hee*
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 19:25
love, love, love it! can't wait for more!
Wednesday, 26 April 2006 11:20
Great installment. The two groups in the same room...awesome.

I'd love to know what the arguement was about?

I really liked the salute at the end.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 26 April 2006 16:07
Loving your work Mrs W, need to know how it's going end! I second the request for no 24 stylee amnesia. I'd love to see how you write Zoe and Wash's reunion, and Malory's reaction when she doesn't get her Stuart or Kerry back.

You are good, damn good.
The Scrof
Saturday, 29 April 2006 01:46
wow that was just like an episode of Firefly...you know the one's were you just wanna scream advice at the screen!!!! TALK TO HER!!! WASH IS RIGHT THERE!!!!!!!!!! argggghhh! write fast!ease my pain.
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 19:59
Why is Wash calling exclusively for Mal? Why not Zoe?

Aw Jayne caring for Kaylee, good times. I don't like em as a pair, but as friends. Most grand.

Y'know, the whole 'Wash is alive' thing is kinda corny, but you write so well, I can so easily see past that. Keep em coming!
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 20:32
Without giving too much away AgentRusco, he's calling for Mal because either he thinks something might have happened to Zoe - or for other reasons not yet explained :)

I'm well aware the 'Save Wash' thing is 'corny' as you put it, but I'm trying to make it as non-corny as possible...
Thursday, 04 May 2006 12:23
Wow, that last bit was kind of surreal. Poor Wash, and I too want to know why he isn't screaming for Zoe unless he is wanting Mal to explain just what the good gorram happened and where in the nine hells his wife is. Hope he gets some answers soon, that is if he can stay awake long enough. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 04 May 2006 22:06
"It’s a happy song, full of laughter. Something about Canton."
^^^Had me laughing out loud^^^

Scenes like this make me so mad that River is still so hurt, because she is the one who could set it all straight.
Saturday, 01 July 2006 13:21
GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what the...it's...he's...wash...mal...GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

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