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Scar Petals

Thursday, April 6, 2006

The crew have gone to fight the Reavers, leaving Wash alone. Spoilers from the BDM - set towards the end of the movie. Will be NC17 later. PG13 for gory fighting, I guess. This fanfic is for ItsAWash and EngineAngel, who inspired me to get on with it and get it posted.

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SCAR PETALS

CHAPTER ONE

Haven?

No safe haven this. Blood, and smoke, and screaming. He will always remember the screaming. Things seem darker than before. The little dinosaurs are blackened by the smoke, their cute noses choked up with soot; they are knee deep in broken glass. So is he. Something felled the palm trees. Their lush green leaves are scattered over the pilot’s desk like splintered emeralds. He tries to reach for them, but he can’t move. His legs won’t move, and it’s like there’s a band of iron round him, round his chest, pinning his arms to his sides, pressing him back into his chair.

He can hear her screaming. Zoe, Zoe. And Mal, shouting. Don’t yell at her. Don’t YELL at her. He can’t open his eyes. There’s weights tied to his eyelashes, holding his lids down. Zoe. He has to get to her. Has to. Is she OK? Is she hurt? Why can’t he see, gorram it? All he can see is black, but inside his head, it’s red, bright scarlet, as if Mal’s reaver-paint job disguise has splashed into his skull and filled it up… Zoe…

Blinding blue-white pain sears itself into every cell, and there is only the bliss of sinking into sleep before he nosedives into oblivion.

“Reavers, Cap, fall back!”

Captain Malory doesn’t listen. She’s never obeyed orders, certainly not from her crew. It’s one of the things they like best about her. She cocks her gun, smells the cordite on the air. Not just cordite, neither. Blood. Red like rose petals in wine, catching in her mouth, shivering along her tongue. Red like her hair, blazing in the sun, a plait of flame bound with black cord and tamed at the base of her neck. The smell of blood hits the back of her throat as she breathes; strong, metallic, like copper. Like licking a penny. But the coin-taste sticks in her throat, and she coughs against the burning red scent, bringing her sleeve up to her cracked lips as if it will protect her. It won’t. There’s just her and her crew…

And - Them.

The Reavers pour across her vision, fluid, shimmering, a symphony of pain blisteri

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Friday, 07 April 2006 02:42
Great first fic. I can't wait for more. The idea of Wash still being alive makes me soooo HAPPY. Excitedly waiting for the next chapter, and secretly cursing you if you decide to take to long.

(I think you just made my day) ;)
Friday, 07 April 2006 04:29
Wow....interesting fic, if a bit confusing for me

Still...can't wait for more:)

BEB
Friday, 07 April 2006 05:11
Wow, this was really good, I was reading faster just so I could get to the end. And I just watched the BDM today, so perfect timing with your fic.
Friday, 07 April 2006 12:19
Great first start, I can't wait to see where you go with this?

I like Captain Malory putting the dinos in her pocket.
Friday, 07 April 2006 17:06
What confused you, BlueEyedBrigadier? I always like to know this kind of thing so I can tweak or make changes, or watch out for further pitfalls!

I wondered if I should have left bigger spaces between POV's, actually...
Saturday, 08 April 2006 00:41
::dances and claps::
Wash is alive!
Wash is alive!
Wash is alive!

Ok now that that's done. I like this and can't wait to see more! Well done!
Saturday, 08 April 2006 18:59
ME WANT MORE, please
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 18:22
this is great. of course I was distraught when Wash was killed, so this is double great. I like your writing style and I am off the read the next chapters.
Thursday, 04 May 2006 11:56
If Captain Malory and her crew are the ones to find Wash and take him with them, who the hell did Zoe, Mal and the others bury on that gorram hill top? Not sure how I missed this first time round so am playing catch up, I'm intrigued as to where you intend to take this alternative story but love having Wash live. Oh yeah, that rocks. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 04 May 2006 21:12
You've got me
1.) Choked up and
2.) Addicted.

If you need inspiration, well, you're gonna get it.
Sunday, 11 June 2006 14:36
save the dinos!!! oh yeah, wash too...*wink*

b

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