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the Luck of the Drawback

Wednesday, April 19, 2006

What will the future hold for the crew when they win the Big Damn Lottery?

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Prompt: Mal. Inara. Jayne. Lottery Winner

Rating: PG

Author's Note: This was written for Agent Rouka, who is graciously allowing me to share it with ya' all. This turned out really strange, but this is what came out... sorty angsty, sorta fluffy... I dunno... It's odd.. *G*

The Luck of the Drawback

By 2x2

“There you are,” said Mal, startling Inara as he came up behind her in the darkness. She turned, backlit by the orange glow of the distant bonfire, offering him a small smile. The light played around her face, softening her already soft features, framing her hair in a halo of gold as the wind carried the sweet melody of music and laughter past them. He stepped up beside her, hands in his back pockets, and stared down at his crew as they relaxed around the fire, talking, laughing and drinking with the locals, for once free of care or worries. Kaylee’s laugh rang out in the clear night air and he smiled.

“It’s a beautiful night,” Inara said wistfully and Mal turned his gaze to her.

“That it is,” he said softly, eyes lingering. He looked away before she could catch him staring, coughing to cover.

She saw him in her peripheral vision, aware of his scrutiny, but chose to remain silent, sighing instead, the melancholia that had settled on her remaining.

“So, how come you’re up here all by your lonesome?” he asked finally, his voice hushed in the darkness, full of questions he didn’t know if he could ask, but hoping she would hear them all.

“Why are you?” she countered with a tilt of her head.

He shrugged, looking away, kicking at the dirt absently. “Don’t much feel like celebratin’,” he admitted.

She stared at him, her eyes dark and deep. “Walk with me?” she asked quietly, holding her hand out to him.

He looked back at her, meeting her gaze, not for the first time wondering what she was seeing when she studied him like that. He drew in a deep breath and pulled his hands from his pockets, nodding for her to lead on as he wrapped his fingers around hers.

She led him up the hill, her d

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 04:27
Good stuff.

I love that of all people it was Jayne who gave up all that money. I'm kind of surprised though, that the others trusted him alone with the ticket. But then, they would have been more worried about him taking off with it, rather than throwing it in the fire.

I loved it. Happy writing.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 05:11
Well damn...that was quite the switcheroo;)

I was surprised too that Jayne actually sacrificed the ticket for the greater good of the crew and Serenity...guess Miranda and the BDHs continuing adventures have really shaped things a certain way for ole Jayne:P

BEB
MALADDICT
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 05:40
Not complaing that I'm desperate for an update on Choices! Not when you are in the mood to write these amazing short piecees.

I just adored this one. Your dialogue feels so right.

Loved that Jayne was the one who destroyed the ticket.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 13:10
Oh this was just perfect! That's our Jayne, just when you think you've got him figured out, he goes and surprises you. This is going to be one of my all-time favorite fics! Good work!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 14:27
wow this really hit a nerve. i've been thinking a lot about the future of our BDHs lately, and it's devastating as hell. good thing jayne had the sense to keep them flying together. though simon might stab him with a scalpel come morning ;)

lovely little fic

~kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 15:10
I would love to see everyone else's reaction in the morning.

The only reason I can see that they would leave Jayne alone with the ticket is that they were drunk too. REALLY drunk.

Except River, I think she would approve.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 20:15
Maybe River had the glimmer of the idea that was floating around in his mind. ^_^
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 21:31
I'm waiting impatiently for Choices, but these little nuggets are pure gold! You have the characters' voices and actions down so perfectly!
Thursday, 20 April 2006 13:15
This was wonderful! And Jayne was exactly right to burn that stupid ol' lottery ticket. They're his family just like they're Mal's.

Thursday, 29 June 2006 16:23
aww, jayne, you big ol' softy...*snuggles*

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