Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Leaps of Faith - 11

Tuesday, April 18, 2006

Simon must call on all of his skill as a Trauma Surgeon as he struggles to save Jayne's life.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3228    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thanks: To Jacqui, Josh the Paramedic for help with medical stuff and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.

Rating: PG-17, graphic gore

Remarks: Can Simon save Jayne’s life?

Set after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult. Click on my name to read the backstory. They’re all backstory.

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Leaps of Faith

Chapter Eleven

Wash, Mal and Simon struggle to shift Jayne’s bloody, unconscious bulk onto the table in the medlab. Simon takes a quick look at Zoë’s arm and tells her, “I’ll take care of you once I can get him stabilized.”

On the bench along the wall, River sits with her knees drawn up to her chest, arms around them. “Bullets come home to roost,” she murmurs, mournfully.

Shepherd Book has his arm around a terrified Kaylee who alternately cranes her face to look and turns way in distress.

Mal speaks up, “Had to put the tourniquet on it, doc, or he’d a bled out. Took us about eight minutes to get him back here and he’s been out the whole time, shocky, too.

“At the very least, his femoral artery’s been injured. I’ll know more once I can get the bleeding stopped and get a scan of the hip and upper thigh.” Simon presses the hypo spray against Jayne’s neck and quickly injects a mix of pain-meds and coagulants to slow the hemorrhaging.

“Captain, if you’ll open that second drawer, you’ll find the synth-blood supply. Please pass me four units of O-positive and two of saline.”

Simon skillfully inserts the IV-needle, hangs the synthetic blood and saline, opens the connection that allows the life-giving fluids to flow into Jayne’s body. With amazing speed he places monitors on the unconscious man, checks his heart rate and blood pressure.

“I’m gonna need another

Comments
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 23:27
Fabulous! “Th’ ruttin’ hell you will.”
such a perfect response from Jayne! Love it - keep going!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 00:20
Waaahh! Just when I think there can't be another cliff-hanger, there's another cliff-hanger! Excellent story, KOTGW!!

:)

-Anjabeth (from over at LJ)
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 00:32
Ah lovely. I could just picture Kaylee puking on Simon or something. Good thing she didn't though.
GIRLLEABHAR
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 01:44
i'm loving this story. i can't wait to read more. :D
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 02:50
Jayne will never let the Captain have his share. Great writing.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 03:34
See? I told you I'd be waiting in the med bay. I knew he'd come around. I didn't expect that Kaylee would be helping in THIS WAY, though. That's great. I'm used to the 'she nurses him back to health with her great bedside manner' angle...which is nice, but it has been done. This is fresh. VERY GOOD, woman. Very good.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 04:13
"...Besides, if he dies…” Mal makes his voice real loud, “...I’ll GET TO KEEP HIS SHARE!!!”
“Th’ ruttin’ hell you will.”
The responding voice is slurred and barely audible, but makes everyone smile.

Smile? Hell, the almighty cheer I gave could probably be heard over on your side of the planet. *grin*

I'm strangely proud of Kaylee for staying strong through the surgery. It's good that she could be there for Jayne like that. Shows how far she's willing to go for him. Lets hope he's just as willing to meet her halfway.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 04:30
You've got to make these longer! But still, very good, tense, exciting. All that stuff.
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 11:17
I love that Kaylee can be strong and still terrified. Great!

And I love the wake up speech. lol!

All the emergency medical stuff seems so real, you really nailed this one.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 13:16
Good chapter..Loved "Th’ ruttin’ hell you will" - soo Jayne
Thursday, 29 June 2006 16:18
*whoopcheer* JAYNE!!!

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Friday, 19 August 2011 21:41
*goes limp with relief and clicks next chappie*

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