Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Late, Again

Tuesday, April 18, 2006

Mal makes Inara late for her client, again.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4034    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: Just a little M/I to fill the void. I’ll post this in the next Redux week for FF_Friday under Challenge #99 – Running Late, but in the meantime, I thought I’d post it here.

Word Count: 741

Rated: R for sexual situations

Paring: Mal/Inara

Spoilers: None

Late, Again

by 2x2

He likes to mark her.

Little nips and sucks intended to lay his claim, let them know that she is his, even as she plies her trade. It drives her mad; she knows he does it intentionally, even yelled at him for it once, the first time, when he’d ambushed her barely half an hour before she was due to meet her client, messing her finely arranged hair and clothes, his mouth leaving a trail of red welts around her neck, impossible to conceal.

He can’t regret it, and she doesn’t really blame him. It’s one of her concessions in their on-going war over her job. He lets her go, but he always makes sure they’ll know she’s spoken for. And, judging by the way she moans when he brings his teeth into play, she doesn’t really mind. It amazes him, the way she can’t resist when his mouth plunders her skin, and he’ll use that to his advantage today, marking her, making her late, as he does every time.

* * * * *

Applying the last touches to her make-up, Inara hears the shuttle door open and sighs; knows she is doomed.

“Mal,” she protests as he pulls her to him, mouth attacking her neck, teeth nipping and tongue laving. “Mal, please… I’ve got a client in twenty minutes…” she trails off into a moan. Damn him, she hates his ability to render her weak and helpless with need for him. He’s going to make her late, she knows it, but she can’t care. Can’t even pretend she hasn’t been waiting for him in fretful excitement.

He bends and slides his hands beneath her gown, pushing it up her thighs, his fingers trailing up the inside of her legs before slipping between her moist curls, already wet for him. He strokes her, mouth catching hers in a hungry kiss, pressing himself against her, hot and urgent.

“Damn you,” she breathes again

Comments
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 21:34
Oh, yay! I love little M/I quickies! Passionate and intense, and her frustration, mixed with undeniable desire is portayed very well! Thanks for this!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 22:07
Loved it.
It's so painfully beautiful.
Thanks for posting!
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 22:20
omg this is so beautiful. well, in a devastating sort of way. i think i'm gonna read it again when i'm not at work lol.

i think this is my favorite:
"Little nips and sucks intended to lay his claim, let them know that she is his, even as she plies her trade."

lovely lovely. can there be a sequel? i love the idea of there being a series of vignettes.

thanks for this,
~kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 22:41
I second the notion of a series of vignettes! Mal during the tense hours Inara is away, Inara thinking about Mal while she's with a client, Inara making it up to Mal, and maybe making Mal late for a meeting about a job...The possibilities for angst and romance are endless!
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 22:46
I think all I can say is: GUH! Excellent work!
MALADDICT
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 22:49
So I've read this about 4 times now. Mal laying his claim on her body and her unable to resist him-like AT ALL!

I just love these little snapshots. These morsels but oh how I would love a series of these.

You are truly one of my faves.

Tuesday, 18 April 2006 22:52
Excellent but I feel sorry for Mal that while Inara really does love him she can never really be his. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 04:24
I love that mal pouts! I love and adore you (admittedly I blushed and had to skip the sexy stuff) but it was so cute that he like marks his territory. just so cute
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 04:25
sorry, too lazy to sign in that above was me

~sillylittleduck
SAVAGEAMANDA
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 06:53
Oooo I liked it! Sweet and sad. Also liked the way her marked her, the way she described their "ritual". Well done!

I'm with the others above, how about a series of these?
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 12:41
Ooh, this was a nice present to have with my breakfast tea. I love your writing. I haven't had time to play here long, but when I get settled in I'm gonna read every word you've written!

Oh, and btw this was HOT!!! In a good way! :-)
Thursday, 29 June 2006 16:11
why doesn't the daft woman just QUIT?!? i know i would...

b
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 05:45
Beautifully done and very sad. In your world, would she stay if he told her he loved her too. I get the feeling both in this story and Joss's world that he never can't say it.

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