Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Leaps of Faith - 5

Wednesday, April 12, 2006

The crew of Serenity have picked up hot alliance guns and are headed into a shaky job on Aberdeen.
Kaylee pressures Jayne for attention and answers.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3027    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thanks: To Jacqui, for friendship, great beta and encouragement, to Josh the Paramedic for medical info and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.

Rating: NC15, for adult references, heavy on the angst.

Remarks: Jayne and Kaylee struggle to define their relationship. Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult. Click on my name to read the backstory.

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Leaps of Faith

Chapter Five

Mal strides up the ramp, takes a quick look behind, waves farewell to Monte and shouts over his shoulder, “Jayne, Zoë! Get those crates secured now!” He hits the button to close the ramp and bay doors, then give the order to lift off.

“Wash, get our asses off this rock pronto!”

“You got it. We’ll be outta atmo in about five minutes.”

“Take us out over one of the poles. We’re less likely to bump into any Alliance patrols that way. Just keep your eyes peeled and fly quiet.”

There’s a stack of heavy gray and blue freight containers they’ve just hauled into Serenity’s cargo bay. Jayne leans over one and uses his knife to split the Alliance seal that indicates each crate has been secured, then pops the latches. He raises the lid and whistles when he pulls back the packing.

“Lao-tyen boo, ai ya women wanle! I know you said these was Alliance arms, but gorrammit, Mal, this is state-of-the-art stuff here.”

Mal reaches in and re-covers the weapons. Jayne can barely get his hand clear before Mal slams the lid shut and re-latches it.

“Thank you, Mister Cobb! In case it hadn’t occurred to you, we need these seals intact, so our buyer don’t go wonderin’ if we’re sellin him crates of mutton or some such thing.”

“Gear like this, don’ya think somebody’s ruttin’ well gonna notice it’s

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 01:40
Well Jayne, you dummy, you better start saying something or you might lose your girl.

Well written - wonder where it's going?
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 01:50
Good stuff so far. I am a Jaylee fan (though an S/K fan too - is that allowed?) and it's good to see what happens to them after the initial lust dies down. I wonder if Jayne will tell Kaylee the truth of his past. What about Kaylee? Anything in her history she'd rather not tell?

Keep it up as I look forward to your writing.
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 03:51
I agree... it's nice to see some real life creeping in. Also, as great as Jayne is (and I love the big lug), I can totally see him having trouble talking and doing the famous man brush off move. Even the very brave ones can be chickens when it comes to girls.

He needs to relax. SHE needs to relax. I think they are fine if they would just allow themselves to see it.
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 04:33
Grrrr! *smacks Jayne upside the head* Stupid gorram MAN! All that wonderful advice from Shepherd Book and he takes none of it.

*sigh*

He's so worried about the job, too. It makes me wonder what happened the last time he ran into Emerson, and whether that's gonna come back to bite him on the pi gu.

More please. ASAP.
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 08:57
I honestly get the feeling that when Jayne comes clean, it's gonna be anti-climatic. Cuz I think Kaylee's smart enought to know that Jayne has done some less than wonderful things in his past before joining Serenity. Though maybe she'll be surprised at the detais;)

BEB
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 13:19
I can see Jayne worrying about what Kaylee might think of him, but he needs to tell her anyway!

I think the idea of this job is getting to him...is violence going to ensue?

Can't wait for the next installment.
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 18:52
*joins CH in the smacking of jayne's head* get back in that shuttle, boy, and don't you dare come out 'til she's smilin' again!

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