Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Captains and Spies, Pilots and Princes. Chap 2: Corporal Jones

Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Follows on from Zoe's Letter. Not everyone at Serenity Valley was a volunteer....

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Battle of Serenity Valley – 2511

Corporal Thomas Jones of the 72nd Pioneer Regiment moved along the ridge with rest of his section, their backs loaded with digging charges and ammo. In the distance the section could see flashes followed by the low rubbles. Two Wolfhounds flew low and fast heading to the front. Thomas didn’t expect them to be flying back. The flare from engines brightened the sky around them and the section ducked instinctively. To the left and right and behind them Thomas could see the rest of 2 Platoon, B Company duck as well. They were all nervous. They had been in Serenity for several weeks now, mostly doing rear guard duties, convey escort, building FOBs for Independent Fighters, guarding POWs (not that there was many coming back) and the myriad of other duties that was the role of a Pioneer in any army.

Their tour in the valley had been pretty eventful. Both sides regarded this as important battle and the Alliance had sent their crack assault battalions to attack the Independent rear lines, and it had been 72nd who’d had repelled them. Thomas didn’t regard the valley or the war as important. He was a conscript, along with most of the men in the regiment, and was only concerned with surviving.

But the ruperts in the headshed had decided that a big push along the valley was what was needed to tip the balance in their favour. To do that they needed to move the big guns forward so that they were in range of not only the front but also the rear lines as the Alliance retreated. But before the artillery could come in, someone needed to build the firing positions. And that someone was the 72nd Pioneers. Bō hóu pì gu!

They arrived at the coordinates given to them and fanned out, taking up defensive positions, waiting for Lieutenant Jamieson and Sergeant Tesia to decide where set the positions. To his left he heard Pioneers Sally and Davies muttering and shifting about.

“Shut the Vloek up, otherwise I’ll paint a nice shiny arrow on your helmets for the Alliance snipers!” he

Comments
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 00:47
Hope you enjoy it. It is going somewhere, don't worry. All comments welcome, particually about dialoge within the established charaters.
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 06:18
Uh...should we be concerned that Wash has ended up in a special prison camp used a test centre for Alliance military tech? Cuz I am worried about how things will turn out for Wash if he has been tinkered with....

BEB
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 02:33
Yeah, I know my diolog was week in the fourth part of the storie that you read. I could'nt get the proper and polite attitude of Simon so I made it sound like he had gotten used to using a more relaxed sort of speaking around the crew. Thnks for the advice.

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