A small story I was inspired to write while working on chapter eleven of "Over the Hills...". It's a standalone, set ten years post-Serenity. I'm thinking of rewriting it later to play with the style of it a bit, but... well, if it happens at all, it won't be 'til "Over the Hills..." is done, and that will be a while. I hope you enjoy it! ~ Arcadia
Tracing Scars
Mal idly traced the scars on Inara’s body with his fingers as they lay in bed after their lovemaking. When he first met her, imagining a scar on her immaculate body had been impossible. Now, the scars were as part of Inara as anything else. The scar on her shoulder was from a bullet hole she’d received when she and River were on the run after a job-gone-wrong seven years ago. It had been her first real injury. Mal had been out of his mind when she came back, bleeding profusely. Inara had handled things far more gracefully. She told Simon to give her a band aid with a half-smile and a nod towards Zoe, who nodded back, before letting the doctor do his work.
The jagged, three inch scar two inches inward from her left hipbone had caused far more trauma. That had been received five years ago now on a job on Athens. They’d been stealing some coin from a museum there. Fanty and Mingo had given them the job. They hadn’t mentioned that they’d given it to another crew of no-good lowlifes, too. The job had been a bust. Inara had been stabbed. Mal had carried her through the town, which was covered in thick snow, back to Serenity. The depth of the cut, the angle of the knife… the first thing Inara did when she woke up was cry over the fact that she couldn’t have any children. Simon told her that wasn’t true. She still had one ovary left. It would just be harder. But as things turned out, Inara’s tears were justified. Though she and Mal had tried for a while, Inara had never gotten pregnant. She told Mal that it was all right. She was content to look after Kaylee’s critters. But Mal knew that she was lying to him. He never quite knew what to say.
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Oh, so so pretty. I love the explanations of the scars. This is also a very real description of what their life together might have been like. It wouldn't be all fluffy. There'd still be pain and there'd still be danger.
Thanks!
~kaynara
I loved this:
[“I made a choice, Mal.” Her fingers were entwined with his; she lightly squeezed his hand. Her voice was low, soft. “I chose you.”]
Beautiful. Thank you.
Wow... what a powerful parting sentence!
I loved the idea of Mal tracing Inara's scars, remembering their origins... we've seen Inara do that in many stories, but this is the first I've seen of Mal returning the favour... I could very much believe that they would choose to ignore Inara's past, the elephant in the room nobody talks about...
Very nice!
<i>Mal sighed, adjusting Inara in his arms so that her head was resting on his shoulder. Mal noticed not for the first time that there were lines under her eyes now, formed over years of worrying on one thing or another. There were lines, too, around her lips, and though Mal could not say with certainty that they were not caused by frowns he liked to believe that they were due to smiles. As he ran his fingers idly through her hair, which she so rarely let hang down nowadays as wearing it up was much more practical, and he thought about her smile, everything it had meant before and what it meant now.</i>
Beautiful writing!
-kellibus
This is some definitely powerful stuff here, Arcadia....so true to the characters portrayed here and so painful too:( You want to happy that Mal and Inara finally decided to get together, but knowing that Inara's past had to be ignored and her beauty marred by scarring just hits you below the belt. The joy coming at the expense of Inara herself in several ways. I am just glad Mal finally came to realize the truth in the end:)
BEB
I comment generously but I tend to Rate harshly. I don't give 10s often. Your's is the third piece I've given a 10 to on this site.
You can't take the sky from me
I always felt kind of sorry for Inara.
Its strange how she keeps talking about choices; about how she always chooses her clients, chooses her situations, how the choice is always hers. But I keep thinking about how she started training to be a Companion when she was like, 12.I remember when I was 12, every week I wanted to be something different when I grew up.
It seemed to me that the Companion training took away her choices in life, I mean, after so long preparing to be one thing, how hard would it be for her to turn around and be something else.
I'm not saying she didn't enjoy her work, I'm just saying its a damn good thing she did, otherwise she would have been miserable doing the only thing it was made possible for her to do.
Just a thought. Great writing.
Very nice .. wonderful ending, no sex but lots implied. Very interesting turn of their lives, and I enjoyed the bit of grieft about no kids, as sad as it was. Made it more real.
very nice job!
If this is how you deal with writer's block.... Can't wait for more chapters in over the hills.
Loved the story (don't mind the tears, I'm just overly emotional today, so really, that's the best compliment I can give you). Beautiful phrasing, and awww for the M/I. I loved it.
Tnx for posting!
CCke
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