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How He Dies

Monday, October 2, 2006

How Mal Reynolds dies. Sorta.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3664    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: How He Dies

Words: 922

Disclaimer: It’s all about Joss

Summary: How Mal Reynolds dies. Sorta.

Mal met his uncle Joe when he was a sixteen year old tough living on his mother’s ranch. Joe said he was a brother of Mal’s daddy, and his mama said so too. Mal wasn’t convinced of it. Joe looked nothing like the pictures he’d seen of his pa, and Mal said so. Joe just smiled, said that blood don’t make brothers. Mal never enquired any further. Truth be told, he could care less about his father and any man attached to him.

Joe stayed with them for a week before taking his leave. The night before he left, he took Mal aside and asked him, “Son, how do you think you’re gonna die?”

He sent letters to Mal sometimes. He always asked the question. Mal never responded to the letters, but he always answered the question.

Sixteen:

Mal Reynolds died an old man. His was tending to his land when his heart gave out. It wasn’t a big surprise. He’d been sick. His daughters had begged him to hire a few more hands so that he didn’t have to do the work himself, but Mal wouldn’t hear of it. He loved tending to the cows and chickens, loved working the horses, loved it all. A little less so, some said, since the death of his wife two years before, but it was love nonetheless. The whole town came to Mal’s funeral, all of them. He’d served as mayor for a while, some twenty years ago. He was beloved among them. After he was put in the earth, the old men got their whisky. They made a fire and told all stories to young boys gathered round, the stories of Malcolm Reynolds, Shadow’s Son.

Twenty-Two:

Mal Reynolds died in the field with his men. The death itself was unremarkable in war time. Men were shot and killed everyday, and that day was Mal’s day. It’d been a hell of a fight. Mal and his men had been holding the temple for three days, an incredible feet. They should have all died, but they hadn’t. Well, Mal had. But his men were still alive, and that mattered. He died, but the war would go on, the war for independenc

Comments
Monday, 02 October 2006 07:15
I like it, Thirty-Five was pretty sad. Good little fic. :)
Monday, 02 October 2006 10:57
You have thought up a very original storyline here though I normally don't like stories where the whole thing is given away by the title. So glad all those possible deaths were wrong and I don't much like Joe either, Mal had the right of that. Why would a grown man keep sending letters to a boy asking him how he was going to die? That was one warped sumbitch. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 02 October 2006 18:24
Thanks for the reviews! I'm glad you like.

I actually like Uncle Joe. He's a little off, but he makes a good plot device. :-)
Monday, 02 October 2006 22:56
Wow...definitely a fabulous plot device to get inside Mal's head at the various stages in his life, Arcadia!

Interesting how Mal dreamt his death would go 3 years after the movie (cuz 35 would make it approx. 2521 or 2522, since Mal is born in 2486;D). Also fascinating how he pictures his supposed immortality/lack of desire to think on his death by 39...

BEB
Thursday, 05 October 2006 12:40
I like it. It shows a real big part of Mal, a man smart but not ignorant of his own mortality. I think he would be the man to have an up to date obituary waiting for his crew just in case. I like the end.... because it shows in a way that he realised he never really would die... he had his family to keep carring him on.
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 05:39
Nitpick: you've got "feet" instead of "feat" somewhere in twenty-two.

Other than that, this is one of my favorites. I like that Mal knows early on that he wants daughters, and that one day he gets them. I like that the idealism suddenly disappears somewhere between twenty-two and twenty-seven (the latter of which was absolutely chilling).
But what really sticks with me is thirty-five, and Inara screaming that it's not a body, it's Mal. It's such a spot-on expression of grief, it stops me in my tracks whenever I think about it.
Excellent job.

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