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Snow Angels

Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Mal takes Inara long to make a delivery on a snowy planet. Two or so months post-Miranda.

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Title: Snow Angels

Rating: G

Summary: Serenity is delivering medicine to a very snowy planet. Inara goes with Mal to make the delivery.

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Malcolm Reynolds was an early riser. It was a habit he’d gotten into during his childhood. His mother would wake up at dawn to start chores. Mal always got up with her to help, even when he was very young and not much help at all. These days, he didn’t need to get up so early – if there was such a thing as ‘early’ in space – but he did anyway. On some days it was a comfort. He woke up and he felt connected to his mother, to Shadow, to that person he was before. Other days, it was a torture. He woke up bone tired, cursing his mother’s memory. Rarely did he wake up to the sound of voices.

Mal noticed them before he even opened his eyes, the sound of laughter drifting down from the kitchen. Kaylee’s mirth filled giggles. Jayne’s confident snicker. River’s overly loud chortle. Heck, he even though he heard the doc’s nervous chuckle. For a moment, Mal smiled at it. There really hadn’t been much laughter on his boat lately. There was a part of him that pretended that was a good thing, more orderly. But he remembered his mother, too, and how her ranch hands would laugh, telling dirty jokes that Mal would repeat to his friends at the school house…

“Mornin’ Cap’n!” Kaylee greeted cheerily when Mal entered the room. “Sleep well?”

Mal didn’t answer for a moment, taking in the site of the room. Jayne and Zoe were sitting next to each other at the table, Zoe’s right ankle supported by the chair on the other side of the table. Zoe nodded to him when he entered. Jayne, though, was much to busy concentrating on the metal monstrosity on the table. “Umm… Kaylee,” Mal said, “what is that?”

Kaylee smiled in response, practically bounding. “It’s a sleigh, Cap’n!” He tilted his head. “For sledding?” He still didn’t react. Kaylee smiled anyway. “Jayne an’ River an’ me have been workin’ on it all mornin’. Its gonna be the best sleigh ever.”

“Damn right

Comments
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 08:13
Aww, that was so gorram cute! I loved it!

I always like your Mal/Inara, but I really like the idea of Inara letting go, doing her best to trust someone, especially Mal. And the fact that she had set up the chairs so they could watch the northern lights together - absolutely adorable.

Although I'm thinking a sequel is in order - Mal, after all, has a promise to keep!
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 14:40
This is just fantastic.

And I'm with TamSibling - there must be a sequel!

>"Doesn’t mean she should be goin’ out on jobs. She ain’t trained for it. She’s got not experience, no qualifications…”
>“You need a resume to be a thief these days, Captain?” said Zoe

Hilarious!
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 16:45
*Sniff* This seriously made me tear up. It was just so sweet and *REAL*. Mal and Inara had a moment and it was just perfect. Thanks, Arcadia! You've made my day!
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 17:54
Loved this to bits and so happy they kissed! This was wonderfully romantic with neither Mal or Inara saying or doing anything dumb to spoil the moment. Inara said it best when she said they were both guarded people and they are but now that their defences are down we definitely need a sequel to see how they handle what happened in the morning. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 23:24
>>"Doesn’t mean she should be goin’ out on jobs. She ain’t trained for it. She’s got not experience, no qualifications…”
>“You need a resume to be a thief these days, Captain?” said Zoe

Definitely the best line. Not many people write Zoe well, but you've got her down very good.

And you write the Mal/Inara tension real well too. Nicely done!
Thursday, 18 January 2007 05:33
Yep...I'm giving you a 10, Arcadia. Cuz in my books...this is worth the entire spread :D

Between Zoe's rejonders to Mal about his paranoia to how you handled Mal and Inara slowly letting each other into their respective hearts and minds...I was awed and basically tearing up at just how spectacular this was ;D

BEB
Friday, 19 January 2007 06:51
I want to thank all of your for the lovely reviews! :-) They mean a lot to me. I am especially glad that you all enjoy Zoe. I haven't had a chance to write her in a long time, so it was fun. I wouldn't expect a sequal, but I am very complimented that you've asked for one. If I ever get an idea... but we'll see. Thanks everyone!
Saturday, 20 January 2007 16:09
What a wonderful story! I enjoyed the fluff very much but you kept everyone so true to character. Wonderful!
Saturday, 20 January 2007 17:04
This is so sweet! I'm glad you chose not to have them sleep together so quickly. Mal sending her off to her own bed is so gentlemanly of him. That small act is all Inara really needs from a true love.

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