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Leaps of Faith - 4

Monday, April 10, 2006

Jayne and Kaylee struggle to define their relationship and Mal takes on a risky job, while Book offers more wisdom.

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Disclaimer: Not mine, no pay.

Thanks: To Jacqui, for friendship, great beta and encouragement, to Josh the Paramedic for medical info and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.

Rating: NC-15 this section, for adult references and a bit of angst.

Remarks: I continue to explore the challenges faced by Jayne and Kaylee as they struggle to define their relationship. Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult.

Feedback: Folks, this is like food and drink for writers. Your comments and suggestions mean a lot and help keep us going. Please post below or e-mail Lumenea@aol.com. Makes lots more sense if you read the whole series – just click on my name and the whole bunch are there, waiting for you.

Leaps of Faith

Chapter Four

Mal calls everyone together around the table. “Listen up, people. We’ve finally got a job lined up. Been a pretty lean spell for us, and I won’t lie an’ tell you I’m feelin’ all easy about this one, but for now, it’s the best bet we got.”

Zoë and Wash exchange knowing glances; Jayne sits up a little straighter, tilts his head skeptically. If the Cap’n’s admitting right off the job is shaky, well, that means seriously shaky.

“So what’s the deal, Mal?” Jayne prompts, twiddlin’ his thumbs in a restless way.

Mall rubs his hands together, then leans forward, plants his palms on the table, and nods.

“Got a contact with a hot load of weaponry that’s been parted from its’ prior owner, namely, the Alliance. And we got a buyer who’s willin’ to pay a good bit over the askin’ price. Should be easy-breezy, turn us a nice little profit. All we gotta do is pick up the cargo an’ get it to the buyer.”

“Sir?” Zoë speaks up first. “Aren’t we asking for trouble hauling Alliance arms?”

“Oh yeah, all we need is to get nailed with Alliance gear on board!” Wash blurts out. “When you say ‘easy-br

Comments
Monday, 10 April 2006 23:18
You go, girl! I am liking this story more and more all the time. You are really getting some good layers going here. I am a sucker for a good Jayne/Book chat any day.

As for this job.... I have faith.

Keep up the good work.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 April 2006 23:28
Fabulous honey! That conversation reads so true. Jayne does have a brain, he just uses it...sparingly. When it's really important, like with Kaylee. Thanks for making Jayne more than the usual. Keepm it coming! D
Monday, 10 April 2006 23:31
sorry, that anonymous was me!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 00:14
Weeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

Oh, Jayne. You're such a sweetheart.

Rinny
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 05:40
Excellent Jayne/Book dialogue here, hisgoodgirl...definitely could have seen this had the series continued and Joss had decided to go a certain way with the various pairings:)

BEB
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 06:19
The way you've written the characters is so spot-on, I felt like I was watching an episode.

I love your Jayne. Hell, I love Jayne full stop, but you've managed to tap into that big heart of his just enough to see the tender, but without making him soft.

Can't wait to see what happens on the job.
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 07:32
Good Jayne/Book conversation. Always loved their interaction. Well done.
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 12:36
I'm having reservations about the job too. Hope none of the BDHs get hurt, specially Jayne.

I like the Shepherd and his advice, very true to life.

Can't wait for the next one!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 12:44
<The long silence is punctuated by Serenity’s hums and creaks, then Jayne takes a deep breath and steps off into unknown country.

“I won’t lie, Preacher. I love that girl. I’ve kept company with a lot a loose women in my day, but I ain’t been with another woman in goin’ on three months, haven’t even had the urge.”>

Hmm...I guess LOVE is an "unknown country" for Jayne. But if he's given up keeping company with loose women, he must have it pretty bad for little Kaylee.

Could it be that Serenity's bad-ass man ape has a heart after all?

Great character voicing, HGG. Keep it coming!





Wednesday, 14 June 2006 16:14
he's just a big cuddly bear...

b
Wednesday, 17 August 2011 19:22
haven't got much to say exept that I love every single chappie *clicks on next chapter*

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