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Leaps of Faith

Friday, April 7, 2006

Kaylee struggles to come to terms with Jayne's life, his past, his job and how their relationship fits around that.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3573    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine, no pay.

Thanks: To Jacqui, for friendship, great beta and encouragement, to Josh the Paramedic for medical info and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.

Rating: NC-15 this section, for adult references. Later chapters, angst, violence.

Remarks: I continue to explore the challenges faced by Jayne and Kaylee as they struggle to define their relationship. Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult.

Feedback: Seriously, folks, it's what it's all about. Love it or hate it, I crave your comments and observations. Post 'em here or email me at Lumenea@aol.com, and thanks.

LEAPS OF FAITH

Chapter One

“Wash?” She asks.

They are side by side up under Serenity’s main console replacing some of the patched cables and hastily repaired wiring still left over from Saffron’s sabotage efforts.

“Yeah?” The air smells of hot flux and solder. “Tzao gao! Ai ya, that’s hot.” He sticks his burned finger in his mouth.

“You’re supposed to be solderin’ the contact, not your finger, ya know.” Kaylee rolls her eyes and clips away a taped power cable, then begins to strip and prepare a replacement.

“Oh that…” Wash shakes his stinging hand. ”Somehow I thought my finger would work better.”

“How do you handle it?” Kaylee’s voice is quiet and she hesitates. “Lettin’ Zoë go on jobs, I mean.” Her voice is tentative, uncertain, unlike her hands, which work instinctively.

“In case you hadn’t noticed, Zoë’s bigger and a whole lot meaner than I am. Carries a big gun. Kicks ass and takes names, that sort of thing? I learned pretty fast she was gonna do what the guay she wanted.”

He leaned over toward her, as if confiding a great secret. "Of course, there are times I’m in charge and get to call the shots.”

Kaylee looks skeptical. “Like when?”

“Well, you don’t see me letting her play with

Comments
Friday, 07 April 2006 13:24
It's great to see a new story from you!
I like Zoe being all protective of Kaylee and the fact that she & Wash know of the relationship.

Can't wait to read more!
Friday, 07 April 2006 14:00
I've been following this story line all along, and I think this is your best piece yet. You are getting better each time. I, too, like that Wash and Zoe (and maybe everyone) know. Makes sense. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 07 April 2006 15:31
< “I just think she’s starting to realize the guy she’s fallen for works in a high risk profession, a concern I can certainly relate to.”>

Something a lot of folk with spouses in high-risk professions have to face.

Nice touch with Wash and Zoe.

ANONYMOUS
Friday, 07 April 2006 20:05
It'll be interesting to see where you take this. Maybe more than just monkeyshines in Jayne's bunk. Who knows?

Anyway, keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Friday, 07 April 2006 21:44
A great start to what will undoubtedly be angst-filled story of love and pain...possibly the loss of some sunshine too I suspect, hisgoodgirl!

Can't wait for the next part;)

BEB
Friday, 07 April 2006 22:12
Thank you, thank you, thank you!

What a shiny birthday treat - new Jaylee fanfic!!!

Kepp it coming, hisgoodgirl!!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 07 April 2006 23:37
it's a really good start. i can't wait for more.
Saturday, 08 April 2006 02:47
Ah, the 'honeymoon' period is starting to wear off and the 'settling-in and readjusting' period had begun. This is, of course, when you truly see whether a relationship will work or not.

I like that they're invested enough to try, and am mighty interested to see how you play this.

On to the next chapter go I...
Sunday, 11 June 2006 14:56
“That’s an awful thought! Should we take up making love with pillows over our faces?”
“Or I can gag you so you don’t squeal so much.”
somehow, it's just fits that wash would be the one squealing...

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