Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Motivation Series 23: Perfect Fit

Thursday, April 6, 2006

Kaylee takes Simon along on a shopping trip, and makes it very worth his while. It's the next fic in my series, so do I even need to say it's NC-17?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3646    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"C'mon, sweetie." Kaylee said. "Just wanna make one more stop."

Simon shifted the shopping bags she'd been piling on him all afternoon. "Kaylee, we're due back on the ship in half an hour."

"I know, I'll be quick." Kaylee promised. "Wanna get some pretties for our honeymoon." She winked and gestured to a shop right in front of them.

Simon took one look at the display window and nodded. "Sure, that's fine." He didn't bother reminding her that they hadn't actually planned a honeymoon yet.

The only other person in the shop was a sales clerk who looked about Kaylee's age. She was perched on a stool behind the counter, and barely glanced up from her book when the couple entered.

"Now, no peeking." Kaylee instructed. "You ain't allowed to see this stuff beforehand."

"That's the wedding dress, Kaylee." Simon protested. "I've never heard that superstition applied to lingerie for the honeymoon."

"No peeking." Kaylee repeated, grabbing a few more things off the shelves. She led him back to the fitting rooms. They were hidden at the back of the shop, each one closed behind a thin, translucent screen.

Kaylee chose the one at the end of the row. "I won't be long, promise."

As soon as she stepped into the fitting room and closed the screen, Simon finally put down the shopping bags and slumped into a small, worn chair against the opposite wall. He could see the Kaylee's shadow through the screen as she shed her clothes. Then he noticed a thin strip of light in one corner of the screen.

He stood up and leaned closer. Through a thin crack, he could see Kaylee's bare body. She was just slipping out of a long, slinky light blue nightgown. As she shimmied out of it, she giggled and ran her hands over her naked body, and he bit back a groan. She bent over and picked up a short silk slip, a deep shade of red with a thin, delicate lace at the plunging neckline. As she pulled it over her head, Simon took a shaky breath and leaned his head against the screen, closing his eyes as he felt his pants becomin

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 April 2006 17:20
Shopping and sex!!! Just what every girl loves!!! This was great FB! Just love your series! Oh and yeah very GUH!
Thursday, 06 April 2006 17:21
That was me above, damn log in!-Leighkohl
Thursday, 06 April 2006 17:24
Have to be quiet....Simon's less quiet than Kaylee? Bwahaha.

Nicely done. Shopping and sex. .. good thing no one overheard them or was waiting ouside peeking in through the crack themselves...

And, oh -

GUH
Thursday, 06 April 2006 18:21
GUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *dies*
Friday, 07 April 2006 04:03
Excellent work here, FB! So like the 'new' Simon to want to peek at Kaylee;)

BEB
Saturday, 08 April 2006 02:59
<sarcasm>"poor Simon." He's surrounded by evil women. Okay, River is a brat, no 2 ways about it. But I my heart just bleeds for the what Kaylee does to the man....</sarcasm>
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 02:52
Tis Piff, still one of the hottest fics you've written..the hottest (remember that one in the shower...Yeah...) I think what makes it so hot is almost getting caught..LOL or River peeking her head in. MMM..And the way you wrote it..yeah...

tres enjoyable! rating a 10 of course.
Thursday, 13 April 2006 15:44
Shiny
Thursday, 04 May 2006 11:59
"In, now..."

I'll be in my bunk.
Sunday, 24 September 2006 05:59
lol niiiice, the dressingroom, interessting

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