Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Life's Too Short- Part Nine

Monday, April 3, 2006

River warns Mal, Inara gets a nasty surprise, and Mal and Inara have a moment that leaves both wanting more...

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Life’s Too Short- Part Nine

These people aren’t mine, they all belong to Joss and co.

Author’s Note: Sorry it took so long to post this chapter. Okay, here we’ve got some tantalizing info on the bidder, but nothing concrete, and we find out more about Mal and Zoe’s war days, and how they know Jennings, and there’s a good bunch of M/I interaction. All things inside asterisks (*) are supposed to be in italics.

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* It’s dark. No point to lights if you’re blind. The room is empty save for a chair and some equipment too hard to make out in the shadows, and a wave screen, currently black. No need for furniture if you have no legs and only half of one arm. There’s only one person in the room. No one else has ever seen this room, and no one else will. Very few people have laid eyes upon the room’s occupant in years. Why show off a broken, burned body and a face so pocked with scars that the nose is nothing but a slight bump in the livid landscape of pain? A thin tube, running from the right nostril to the stand beside the chair, part of that dim equipment, pumps nutrients and oxygen, should it be needed. The mouth has no lips, only scar tissue and teeth, but the tongue is perfect. There is a black box attached to a band around the throat, with a switch and a dial. It is a voice-diffuser, and it is set to ‘flat’. Inside that mutilated body, behind the blind, ruined eyes, the mind is cold and calculating.

Waiting. *

* * * * * Captain Malcolm Reynolds snickered as Jayne finished his joke. Mal was surprised; the big mercenary actually knew a joke that was pretty funny. Not as funny as Wash’s one-liners, but not half-bad. Kaylee was laughing her light, carefree guffaw, and Simon was trying as hard as he could not to smirk. Jayne nodded in appreciation, a look of self-satisfaction on his face. They’d just finished eating dinner, and were basking in an unexpected rush of good feelings. Even Zoe was smiling. Inara stood, ferrying dishes back and forth with River, who was at the sink. Sh

Comments
2X2
Monday, 03 April 2006 02:56
Kissin'! mmmmm yay!
But so sad... poor Inara, and Damn the Guild!
I melted when he called her bao bei... *sigh*

Very intrigued to see what happens next! And the talking! weee!
Monday, 03 April 2006 03:13
“Hell, no, ‘Nara, I’m sayin’ I don’t want to be your client. I don’t want you to ‘service me’. I was thinkin’ it’d be more the other way around.”

hehe what girl could resist that offer?

Monday, 03 April 2006 04:56
It's always interesting to see situations where Mal's hidden self-doubt and fear surface...how Mal wants to let go so much but is afraid of what will happen if something goes wrong....especially when the fear involves his feelings for Inara;)

Still...lovely stuff here, wingedrashka. Can't wait for the next installment.

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 April 2006 12:25
This was one of the more accurate sounding ones I have read.
I've come in a little late to the game, you see? This is only my third visit to this site.
Thanks for this, though. I miss the series and the movie left me wanting so much more.
I look forward to the next installment.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 April 2006 14:31
w00t! So there was kissin! Can't wait to read more!!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 April 2006 15:35
I love Kaylee climbing into Simon's lap- I like the Mal/INara stuff, too, but K/S are my favorites... great writing! Keep it up!
WINTERHART
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 02:19
Oh heck yes! ^_^ I do adore me some good Mal/Inara, and look eagerly forward to some Jayne/River ;-)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 07 April 2006 06:57
Great!! loving it! please write quicker!! :)
Friday, 14 April 2006 04:53
goodjob man-aas always
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 20:39
very nice- I really enjoy this fic

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