Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Life's Too Short- Part Twenty-Nine

Wednesday, November 15, 2006

Mal, Zoe, Simon and Jayne prepare to start the Big Damn Rescue, and what in the 'verse has River been up to?

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AN: Winding down, with only a few more chapters left. The BDR is finally getting started. The next chapter is probably gonna be the longest, as it is the fight scene/climax. Expect that, as well as another chappie with the aftermath :) I just want to take this time to thank everybody who has stayed through my random posting habbits and so forth, and to thank you all for you support!

Disclaimer: not mine

“Well?”

“Come on.” Simon wheeled around to match Mal’s stride, his hands jammed in his pockets.

“What happened,” Simon pressed. Zoe spoke up from Mal’s right.

“We got screams, blood and an answer.”

“Bastard ain’t even that far away,” Jayne spat. “He’s got his space station just far enough out atmo that the blast won’t hurt him.”

“Blast?” Mal’s lips tightened.

“He’s plannin’ on blowing about seven planets to smithereens, Doc.” Simon’s lips parted, and his expression hardened. He’d not participated in the ‘questioning’ of Mr. Tremain, but now he was beginning to wish he had. Anyone who could participate in a plot to kill so many millions… well, they deserved anything that happened to them.

Jayne, Zoe, Mal and Simon strode down the streets of Persephone to where they’d left the mule, ignoring the venders and streetwalkers that prowled the late-afternoon city. All around them, men and women walked, talked, shouted, cajoled, spat, cursed and laughed. Children milled around, staying out of the center of the streets, keeping to the edges. Big-eyed street urchins, hunched over poorly-lettered signs reading things like ‘Plees Feed Me’ or other, similar messages in Chinese, watched the four as they passed. They were evaluated, and found wanting. The big-eyed urchins turned their heads and let the grim-looking quatrain slip from memory. Women dressed in bright faux-silk, their lips stained with berry-juice if they couldn’t afford lipstick, eyed Mal, Simon and Jayne hungrily. Their eyes, tired and older than their bodies, narrowed. Their mouths curved in sultry smiles and their long, thin fingers twit

Comments
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 03:10
Very interesting look inside River's mind. I like her lucidity when analyzing herself, but also her inability to translate that clarity to speech.

And I love the idea of Simon "saving" the day. Can't wait for the real action to begin!
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 04:23
I like the thoughts of all the fighters having their own thoughts before marching to battle. Very well written and very emotionaly driven
Wednesday, 15 November 2006 11:56
Everyone according to his or her strengths which means Simon coming up with the criminal mastermind plan and the others providing the muscle and sheer stubborn determination to see it through. Sure hope River is cognisant enough at the other end to help them. This is so good! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 16 November 2006 01:00
Oh...that was definitely mighty shiny, wingedraksha! Especially the 4 internal monologues about the upcoming BDR and River's lucid analysis of her own instability. Definitely gives a new perspective to River's behaviour pre-Miranda if her current instability resembles it...

BEB

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