Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Birthday Gift - 8

Sunday, April 2, 2006

The final chapter in a rather extraordinary birthday celebration for Miss Kaylee Frye, in which Jayne demonstrates that he is a master of many skills.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3708    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine, not paid. Love ‘em, all the same. Snack’s over, now down to business.

Thanks: To dear Jacqui, my best beta buddy and to Rion, my own Big Bad Man, who is so very inspirational and knows how birthdays should be celebrated.

Rating: You asked, so I’m gratifyin’ ya - NC17/R. Fair warning, folks, we’re jumping right into the thick of it.

Feedback: Oh yes, kind readers. I grovel nicely, do tricks even. Praise or gripe, it's appreciated, especially if you like a particular bit. To read the previous seven chapters or any of my other stories, click on my name. Makes a lot more fun when you’ve read the lead-up.

The Birthday Gift

Chapter Eight

His mouth was hot and hungry and her pelvis rose to him, her sex pressing against his face. He could feel the rise and swell of her clit and focused his attentions there, his fingers slipping into the wetness of her canal as he worried the sensitive nub with his lips and tongue.

From the very first time they had pleasured one another, Kaylee had realized that Serenity’s mercenary possessed secret skills that had nothing to do with what Mal had hired him for. His insistent rhythmic tongue synchronized perfectly with whatever magical thing his long fingers were doing inside her and she could feel through the pounding of her blood, her body’s surging response.

Again, he skillfully triggered her release and she came, gasping and grinding against his tongue and hand.

“That’s number eight, m’birthday girl.”

Kaylee laughed, panting. “You ain’t goin’ for all twenty-three, are ya?”

He raised one eyebrow in challenge and grinned, then rose on his knees and shifted himself over her, his narrow hips settling between her open thighs as he ground his hardness against her mound, groaning ever so softly with his lust.

“Ya beautiful gorram darlin’.” His voice was hoarse, needful. “Ever since ya left the ship this afternoon, been been wantin’ ta do this. I wanna be inside ya, bao bei.” Jayne grasped

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 02 April 2006 15:03
OMG - what a way to start off a morning, HGG. Squeeeee!

I need coffee, maybe a shot of whiskey.
No, I need to borrow Mal's mercenary. Whew!

Great story!
Sunday, 02 April 2006 15:20
Comment?
Now?
Hang on a sec, I just gotta catch my breath...
*long minute passes*
...Sweet merciful Buddha, that was incredible. I got condensation on the inside of my screen, it was so steamy!!

More. Please.
Sunday, 02 April 2006 16:39
OMG! What a first line! Ya know, death by fabulous sex would be a great way to go, but I think Mal might be a tad upset. Keep up the juicy goodness, just don't kill Kaylee with it! Love ya, D
Sunday, 02 April 2006 18:48
*lights cigarette*
and I don't even smoke, phew!
Sunday, 02 April 2006 20:25
A long pause, then in a low whisper, like gravel on silk.

oh yeah. likin' the jaylee ;)

~kaynara
Sunday, 02 April 2006 21:53
A wonderful end to an engaging story!
Sunday, 02 April 2006 23:02
Ooooooh...I really shouldn't read these at work!

Wonderful like always! I love the ending.

New story please????
Monday, 03 April 2006 01:36
Whoo....it suddenly got hot in this here place....damn that was some good lovin';)

Would be interested in seeing what comes next for these two...especially when the rest of the crew finds out about the Jaylee situation....oh fun times will ensue!

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 April 2006 18:19
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 14:52
Very sweet. And hot. Good combo.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 12:46
This is my favorite piece of work by you YET. Damn. Damn, damn, damn.

Thanks.
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 19:20
uh-huh, now that's what i'm talkin' 'bout...

b

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