Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

"2 Lefts And Then A Right. Or Is That The Other Way Around?" Part. 4 In "Wacky Fun!!"

Sunday, April 2, 2006

Wash is a the best of the best. can find his way, no matter what.So, when he's handed the map to the Alliance prison, getting out should be a cake walk........right?

A/N: REALLY sorry it took so long. Computer lost Internet connection the night I was going to post. Timeing huh? any ways i tried d-spacing this time good? bad? what do ya think? ALL feed back welcome. thanx! -WHIS

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1979    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Wash is in his cell asleep, when he hears foot

steps walking away from him. Then a loud bang,

as the door closes. He looks out left, then

right. He sees nothing, but when he turns around

he See's a brown 2 x 3 feet pony envelope. He

walks up to it and opens it in shock. Because in

side of the package is the blue prints to the

alliance facility he's in. "Wow", he says still

in shock. "Guess I'm not so screwed after all."

Wash has a small smile on his face. This is the

first piece of good news since I woke up I this

place. He thought. And to think, a few weeks ago

he was going no where fast! With his smile

still on his face, he goes to work looking for a

way out.

One hour later.......

The guard walks up to the door. Wash is

pretending to be asleep, behind the gate. As the

guard opens it Wash hits the gate with both his

feet, sending the guard flying into the opposite

wall. Wash gets up looks down at the guard

and says: "Sorry Charlie, Wash is unable to take

your call at the moment. please leave at

the "Beep". Wash takes "Charlie's" gun and heads

off in his pre-planned destination. "I hope this

works." is what he say's to him self, knowing

he's going to need all the luck he can to pull

of this fong luh (Crazy) plan.

30 minutes later.......

Wash is running though the halls looking sightly

confused. "Ok, that was a left, right?" he looks

down at the map again. Then up. And then, hoping

that the map would change, looked down

again. "Ok that," and he points down one of the

four halls. five if you count the one he came

though. "is where I came from. and that," he

points to another hall "is the hall I started

from sooooo......" he looks at the map once

more "I'm back where I started from. Great!!"

he sighs, and looks at the map once more. Then

he see's something. Something he can't believe

he missed. he sighs "Dang-ran. (of course.)" he

says........an

Comments
Sunday, 02 April 2006 03:15
if ya don't like the D-space tell me and i'll change It.
Sunday, 02 April 2006 04:53
Its great that Wash talks to himself while he is escaping its something that he would completly do. Keep up the good work.
Sunday, 02 April 2006 07:41
Not a bad piece of fic, Watch...Soar;)

Though I do find the d-spacing for this a mite distracting...though not as bad as massive paragraphs.

BEB
Sunday, 02 April 2006 08:54
Truely Wash Worthy!
Sunday, 02 April 2006 23:45
WHIS, I like your Wash. He's a good 'un. And I like the foot-gate crashing bit. Nice.

Not crazy about the spacing, but that's just me. You should do it however YOU like it. Write us some more, okay? Hope your pc behaves so you can. *huggles.
Friday, 14 April 2006 00:08
The best do far of this series.
The spacing isn't great, maybe it's just me. Space out the dialoge, cause it can get lost otherwise (as happened abit in the early parts of your story).

Looking forward to seeing how it playts out!
Monday, 22 May 2006 05:32
I really like this, you have captured wash totally.

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