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Motivation Series 21: Clumsy

Friday, March 31, 2006

Kaylee's having a bad day, and Simon will do anything to cheer her up. Next fic in my series, NC-17, not for kids or prudes.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3776    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Have you seen Kaylee?" Simon had so far asked Zoe and Inara, and neither of them knew where the young mechanic was. He was making his way through the ship and had reached the cargo bay, where Jayne was lifting.

"Nope." Jayne replied, breathing heavily as he set down the weight. He saw the bowls in Simon's hands. "Hey, food!"

"For Kaylee." River cut in, leaning down from her hiding place on the catwalk above the two men.

"Ah!" Jayne yelped, sitting up so fast he hit his head on the bar above him. "How long you been there?"

River ignored him and looked at her brother. "Kaylee's in the empty shuttle."

"Thanks, mei-mei ." Simon called up to her.

"Hey, where you goin'?" Jayne asked, rubbing his forehead. "I'm injured!"

"Not anywhere that you'd notice." River giggled, making Simon grin as he climbed the stairs.

In the empty shuttle, he found Kaylee sitting in the middle of the floor, tools around her and a frown on her lovely face. "Hungry?" He asked.

"Oh, hi, sweetie!" Kaylee looked up, her face changing instantly. "Aw, you brought me lunch?"

"Thought we could have a picnic, of sorts." Simon replied, handing her a bowl of noodles and a pair of chopsticks. He saw hesitation on her face. "Don't worry, Inara made lunch today."

"I wasn't worried." Kaylee told him. She held the chopsticks awkwardly, dropped them a few times. Then finally, as her frustration increased, the thin wooden sticks snapped in half between her fingers. Letting loose a string of Chinese curses, she pushed her bowl away and buried her face in her hands.

" Baobei , what's wrong?" Simon asked, immediately moving to her side and putting one arm around her shoulders.

"I don't know." Kaylee moaned. "I think I'm goin' crazy or something. I can't do anything right today and I don't know why. I keep droppin' stuff, I can't figure out what's wrong with those stupid controls. It's like overnight I've turned into the biggest klutz in the 'verse and I got no idea why."

Her bottom lip was starting to tremble a

Comments
Friday, 31 March 2006 17:52
Give me a moment while my brain regains its normal functions. . .

GUH.

Hot.

Kaylee's all clumsy and doesn't know why. . . God, I can't wait to see when they find out!

River scaring Jayne was a nice touch.
Friday, 31 March 2006 19:46
GORRAMMIT! you ended it wayyyyy too soon.... that's like... the best position and ya cut it off!!! great fic nonetheless PWP ROCKS lol although plot is nice :-D
Friday, 31 March 2006 19:55
*points* Tammy told me to end it there! ;-P
Friday, 31 March 2006 20:48
Great job!!! I'll be in my bunk.
Friday, 31 March 2006 23:08
Oh...boy....I both pity and envy Simon's predicament;)

Still...can't wait to see how both of them react to the news of why Kaylee's suddenly uncoordinated:P

BEB
Friday, 31 March 2006 23:14
WOW.... I had the best laugh at-

"Fuck!" -....LMFAO!!! Hee hee!

There was abosolutley nothin' clumbsy about that! Should be a new ballet act...LMFAO...

*scampers off...other places to review in!*
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 April 2006 00:21
Heee that was awesome, and so very hot! =)

Keep it up!

I also can't wait to find out why Kaylee's all clumsy and highly sensitive! ;)

~Jules~
Saturday, 01 April 2006 02:03
Yup, I'm definetly a prude, I'm just not into that sort of fan-fic.

Good writing though, keep it up. Oh boy that sounded wrong.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 April 2006 03:14
Ah, those lovely super-horny days of early pregnancy....the mood swings, the daydreaming....they should enjoy it....having a toddler makes it difficult to engage in a great deal of hanky-panky...though i figure they'll have no shortage of baby sitters....
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 April 2006 19:23
Definitely loving your fics. Very hot. I certainly prefer the Porn with Plot, but when you write NC17 as well as you do, who cares! I Still check for updates daily as I can't wait to read their reactions to the pregnancy. Great job, and I vote for the extended director's cut to be posted!

~Wickedwms
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 April 2006 22:05
Great job as always, hun. I feel I'll only repeat what everyone else is saying, but I can't wait for the pregnancy to be revealled either :P
~ misskitten
Sunday, 02 April 2006 00:06
Well, that was fun :)

Tease!

I really wish you hadn't ended it so soon, though. MMmmmmmmm. Yep.
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 21:05
WOW! Yep, pregnancy makes you clumsy and a little randy!!! Good Job there FB! Love your stuff!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 14:48
Your a bit of a tease in this one FB
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 23:52
I Know how Kaylee Feels! Goin thru the same thing right now... so glad my husband's like Simon and always willin to give a little extra ;) Loved the story you captivated our emotions so well! Keep the stories commin!
BOHEMIANBABE
Thursday, 15 June 2006 07:10
clumsiness is sexy?

god i must be the hottest woman on earth!'

keep up the great work

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