Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Birthday Gift - 6

Thursday, March 30, 2006

The big merc shows Kaylee his underwater skills and a new way to celebrate her birthday.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3493    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine, not paid. Love ‘em, all the same.

Thanks: To dear Jacqui, my best beta buddy and to Rion, my own Big Bad Man, who helps me figure out what mercs do on nights off duty

Rating: You asked, so I’m gratifyin’ ya – solid NC17/R. Can a bath be smutty?

Feedback: Oh yes, kind readers. I grovel nicely, do tricks even. Praise or gripe, it's appreciated, especially if you like a particular bit. To read the previous five chapters or any of my other stories, click on my name. Makes a lot more fun when you’ve read the lead-up.

The Birthday Gift

Chapter Six

Kaylee ran a little more hot water, to warm the cooling tub and settled back against Jayne, leaning her head against his shoulder. “Jayne, when you was little, did your family celebrate birthdays?”

”Like how?” She’d learned that the subject of Jayne’s family was a difficult one, and felt him guard up a little, like he generally did when asked about his past.

“Well, like everybody getting’ together, maybe presents or somethin’ special for dinner?”

He thought about it for a moment, weighing what to share. “Well, we didn’t have much. My Ma done what she could but …” His voice trailed off. “Mostly, she’d scrape up to buy some yarn, sewed or knitted us some special thing.”

“Oh, like your hat!”

“Yeah…” Jayne responded sheepishly.

“What about you, lil’ girl, what did your folks do?”

He dipped the washcloth in the fragrant water and gently drizzled the warm liquid over Kaylee’s breasts.

She could tell he was eager to change the subject.

“Well, it was always a big deal for us. Neighbors and family, Ma’d bake a cake.”

“Sounds pretty special.” He eased further down into the water with her, quietly envying the warmth and normalcy Kaylee seemed to have known growing up.

“Mostly, yes. Except for my Pa and his gorram birthday spankin’s! Said they made ya grow better. Weren’t so bad when I was little, but after I got up a bit, it was embarrasin’ and hurt, too!”

“Oh I c

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 19:46
I'd rather have Jayne's version of birthday celebrations than a spanking anyday. Maybe I could have both?

Great story development and smut, too, like, all in one. Yay!
Thursday, 30 March 2006 19:59
I'm liking this very much.

Who says "That's number one..."? Is Jayne going to do something for each year of Kaylee's life, ala his own birthday spaniking?

Waiting with soapy satisfaction for more...
Thursday, 30 March 2006 21:35
Hey ArtemisPrime!

Sorry that read a little unclearly.

Yep, Jayne is celebrating Kaylee's birthdays with an alternative to spankin's... < grin >
Thursday, 30 March 2006 23:17
Yes, baths can be smutty. Apparently we all like smut! Sent you another email, but if it interfere's with the writin', don't read it! Can't wait for more! D
Friday, 31 March 2006 02:16
Gotta say...have to admire Jayne's alternative to spanking, though I do wonder about how long Kaylee will last if he keeps the process up. Cuz while I can imagine the possibility of Kaylee being multi-orgasmic, getting enough Big O's for each of her years will become rather...draining after awhile;)

Still....hot, wet and excellent, HGS!

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 31 March 2006 02:17
Wait. Are you saying that, instead of spankings, Jayne is going to give an orgasm for each year of her life?

hmmmm...this could go on for a while...lucky girl...
Friday, 31 March 2006 03:06
My mind is the strangest place in the 'Verse, I swear. Here I am, reading all this hot hot smut, and my brain's goin', "Man, aren't they getting all pruny by now?"

Stupid brain... Must concentrate on the Naked Jayne! *stares hard at screen*

I'll just have go back and read it again, neh? And again, and again...
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Friday, 31 March 2006 04:40
I don't need birthday spankings either....
Friday, 31 March 2006 10:23
Hot again! *fans* Brilliant.

Love the discussion about birthdays and (of course) the alternative to the spankings.
Saturday, 03 June 2006 16:04
mmm...*melts in a smutty goo-pool of bliss*

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