Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Betrayal

Wednesday, March 29, 2006

A message is delivered.
Warning: This story contains rape. It is not described, but it happens between the paragraphs. If you do not want to read anything about that, you may not want to read this.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3859    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Rating: R for Rape (not described)

Word Count: 598

Spoilers: None

Author’s Note: This is probably the darkest fiction I have written to date. It is not happy. A rape occurs. It is not described, but I’m warning you now, if you don’t want to read anything about that, you may not want to read this. I honestly don’t know where this came from, except that a book I was converting at work yesterday had a rape in it, which probably put the topic on my mind.

Betrayal

by 2x2

She invites him into her shuttle like she has dozens of times before.

They exchange pleasantries, but as they continue to talk and he still hasn’t revealed his reason for coming, a surprising uneasiness begins to creep into her thoughts. She dismisses them at first - she knows him too well, he’s above suspicion - but the feeling persists. Though it hasn’t been a concern before, she is acutely aware that they are the only two on the ship right now. Then she notices something in his eyes she’s never seen before and suddenly he’s standing far too close.

“I have a message for you,” he says, and she can feel his breath as the expression on his face changes - hardens - and the implications of his words sink in.

She realizes too late that she really doesn’t know him at all.

She runs then, desperately, for the hidden, cold secret she’s never had to use before, but he’s faster. She strikes out, her training instinctively directing her limbs to act while her brain is still too numb with shock to think, but she is outmatched by his skill. Without effort he repels her attack; the force of his blow knocks the breath from her lungs and she crumples, clutching her stomach, fighting to draw air into her frozen lungs.

He picks up the box that holds the secret and opens it, a smile that isn’t his twisting his face as he looks at her. He closes it again and sets it on the floor, then brings his foot down on it with a violent crash of his heel, wood splintering and glass shattering as the box and syringe it contains are destroyed. All

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 23:17
I like it. Unexpected and hints at layers and intrigue without actually getting into details.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 00:05
GAHBOOK!!!!!!!

Translation: Gosh, amazingly it was Book.

So freaking perfect... I like it.

Though I didn't understand the 'secret' part...?
2X2
Thursday, 30 March 2006 00:47
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I like it. Unexpected and hints at layers and intrigue without actually getting into details.</i>

Thank-you! I have to admit, even I don't fully know the details behind all that, but something was there as I was writing it, so who knows, maybe I'll explore it later!

Araglas,
The 'secret' was in reference to the mysterious sryinge that Inara had in the episode 'Serenity', she takes it out when there is the threat that they will be boarded by Reavers, and much speculation has abounded to it's actual purpose. I don't know what it is myself, but I thought it was interesting that Inara's first instinct was to run for it...

<i>So freaking perfect... I like it.</i>

Wow. Thank-you so much!
Thursday, 30 March 2006 02:18
wow, powerful stuff. i love how you kept her attacker a secret till the very end. of course the whole thing begs explanation: did book and inara know eachother pre-Serenity? how does inara deal in the aftermath? does mal find out? if you're of the mind to write a sequel...;)

great fic!
~kaynara
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:22
Uh....shit? This some dark stuff, 2x2, and I am interested in seeing some more. Like its temporal setting and the reason behind the need for Book, someone who seemingly would have done this in an earlier part of his life, to rape Inara on behalf of...the Guild? The Alliance?

A sequel would certainly add to this pleasantly disturbing fic you have here.

BEB
Thursday, 30 March 2006 11:08
Dark as it is I just can't see Book (or whoever Book is really) doing this to Inara. I mean he doesn't, not ever never. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
2X2
Saturday, 01 April 2006 06:36
Amdobell: sorry :o(

Kaynara and BEB: Sequel? I don't know... this just kinda popped into my head... going into detail would be venturing down a long dark road I think, and I'm not sure I'd want to play there that long... but, one never knows when inspiration might strike! I can say that, no, Book and Inara did not know each other pre-Serenity, that much I know for sure... the rest? I have no idea my own self yet... I'll let you know if something else ever comes out of it though! Thanks!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 18:06
Wow!! Very good. I knew it was Book (really who else could it be) but you had me concerned there as you described how he folder he shirt all neat like. For just a moment I was afraid it was Simon, but then knew it wasn't. Sequel would be nice but understand if it's just not there. Patti
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 06:57
dear god
That was good but scary all the same.
Saturday, 03 June 2006 15:37
kind of an m. night shyamalan-ish twist at the end there. very good in a warped way.

b

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