DISCLAIMER: Don't own it, never did, just having fun playing.
A/N: A huge thanks to kispexi2 for betaing this, my first multi-chapter effort! Wouldn't want to do it without you!
This is the last chapter of Part 1. Another companion story will follow, then on to Part 2!
Translations are in mouseover.
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, , , , , , , , , , , Chapter 12 Mal asks Simon a question. Mal and Simon stayed in their bunk the rest of the morning. Simon continued to hold Becca, while they discussed his insecurities. They'd had similar discussions throughout the years, and Mal wondered if Simon would ever realize that he had absolutely no reason to feel insecure. Ah, well, old habits are always the hardest to break, and Simon had a habit of thinking himself weak in one way or another. He, personally, had never thought so. Well, maybe the first time they laid eyes on each other, but not since shortly after that. Maybe someday he'd convince Simon. When Becca began to stir, Simon decided it was time to take her back to Zoë, while Mal stayed in the bunk to work o
Though I do have to wonder about how being a surrogate would affect River mentally...possibly/probably bonding with a life she helped create but not be a direct parent too would be an issue needing a lot of work to handle.
BEB
I agree with what you say about River. Hopefully, part 2 will address your concerns to your satisfaction. Look for it soon.
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