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Life's Too Short- Part Four

Saturday, March 25, 2006

Patience makes a deal, and Mal gets suspicious.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3804    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Life’s Too Short- Part Four

These characters aren't mine... :(

Author's Note: I know I said this one would be

really long, but it kind of isn't. So I lied.

It's pretty long, though, and the next one will have to be long because it'll be all actiony and exciting. So for all of you who like to read a lot at a time, by tomorrow afternoon (I hope) there should be more. :)

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“It’s come to our attention that you have had dealings with a Captain Malcolm Reynolds, of the Firefly-class transport vessel-”

“Serenity. Reckon I know the name,” said the gray-haired woman with the lined face and the flinty eyes. She sat at a wooden table, watching the screen expressionlessly as the Alliance commander narrowed his eyes.

“We’re also aware that you and Captain Reynolds did not part on… friendly terms.” Patience didn’t move a muscle. Her tired, pinched face didn’t give an inch, and her eyes were far from old and far from tired. They were calculating and hard and totally unafraid. The Alliance commander was taken aback by this calm, controlled woman out here on a Rim world, staring him down like a crocodile.

“And?”

“We’d like to offer you a job.” Patience smiled at the commander, and it was a sweet smile. It even reached her eyes. Somehow, the commander was not taken in by the smile. It seemed almost as dangerous as the stone face he’d seen before.

“I’m quite fond of money, Commander Nolson.” Of course you are, he thought.

“We’ve become aware of the fact that you are arranging a job with Captain Reynolds in the near future. What we want is simple: when and where the rendez-vous is to take place, and your full support.”

“You want me to set up an ambush for your people, is that it?”

“It is.”

“Well, son, how much in payment are we talking?”

“How much would you like?” Patience leaned forwards on the table, clasping her hands in front of her like a woman at prayer. Perhaps she was, though her god would never appear in any church.

“Now, I ordinarily don’t

Comments
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Saturday, 25 March 2006 21:04
as usual, awesome, astounding even. i can't wait for some Rayne. i've been waiting a long time!
Saturday, 25 March 2006 21:08
Oh very nice. Love the conversation between Inara and Kaylee. Looking forward to seeing that new dress on Kaylee too ..do make sure we get to see Simon's reaction to it....of course, if they're running into trouble, there may BE no dress....

Action is nice....looking forward to it!
Saturday, 25 March 2006 21:20
Oooh, I am so gorram happy that River is on Mal and Zoe's side. Not that I think Simon is going to like his sister going along on the job. Can't wait to see Simon's face when he sees Kaylee in that dress either! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 25 March 2006 23:08
Bring on some action ... I love Kaylee and Inara on Orion, but gorramit, why does there always have to be trouble? Can't the girls just do a little shopping?

Post again soon!
2X2
Saturday, 25 March 2006 23:42
> “Yup,” Mal replied, pulling a canister of Protein Delight out of a cabinet.

BWAHAHAAH! Protein Delight, I love it!!!

Enjoying this lots... love Inara's little "I feel pretty strongly" admission - squee!! And more angst on the way, more kissin' too I hope?? yummmy!!
Sunday, 26 March 2006 05:00
Oh....I think Simon's gonna be having a "GUH" moment in the future....even if Kaylee has to do some improvisin' to make up for not having the dress;)

And I am loving how neither Mal nor Inara are jumping for joy now that the hurdle of conscious kissing has been overcome....retro teenaged love never goes out of style:)

BEB
SHADOWANGEL
Friday, 30 January 2009 20:11
"Where was the faith? Where was the trust?" If ony so many of Mal's "plans" didn't end up with people shooting at them! :)

Really loving this and ready for the Rayne!

(and just realized it's been 3 years since anyone else has commented, so I'm gonna shut up now...)

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