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Life's Too Short- Part Two

Friday, March 24, 2006

Mal talks to Inara, and River startles Jayne.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4238    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Life's Too Short- Part Two

Disclaimer: yeah, yeah, the characters aren't mine.

Author's Note- wow, I'm really on a roll today. I've added a little J/R, for those of you who like that, and set up a job on Whitefall. Adventure, yipee! *Please commment*

“Got a job for us, sir?” Mal swung around to face Zoe, who'd just climbed out of her bunk. He studied her face for a second.

“Yep. We'll be landin' on Whitefall in nine hours.”

“Whitefall, sir? Seems I recall a few bullets chasing us last we left Whitefall.” Her eyes were steady and tired.

“We need the work. 'Sides, she only shot me once.”

“She tried for twice. If that horse hadn't been there-”

“But the horse was there, Zoe. I can handle Patience.” He clapped her on the shoulder. One dark eyebrow rose. Her eyes. The light that used to shine there was down to a mere flicker. Mal wanted to bring it back, just for a moment. Just for a moment.

“I was thinkin', maybe you and me could find a bar on a friendly planet near Whitefall. Ain't lookin' for trouble, I just...”

“A bar, sir?”

“You remember the time Wash dared me to sing the buttercup song?” It was risky, saying the name. He wasn't sure it was wise to mention Wash, but no one else on the gorram boat would. And it wasn't like Mal was ever known for his wisdom, right?

“I surely do,” Zoe replied softly.

“Well, as I recall, we sort of had to leave that bar before I could get drunk enough to carry through.”

“We got thrown out of that bar, sir.”

“True, true,” Mal said, a rambling note in his voice. Then, he straightened and put a hand on her arm. “I intend to follow through with that bet, Zoe, an' I want you to be there. As witness. Wash never woulda believed it otherwise.” A muscle twitched in her jaw, and Mal held his breath.

Then, a faint smile.

“All right.” It wasn't much, but it was more than he'd hoped for.

O' course, now he was stuck with singing the stupid song.

Mal let go of his old friend's arm and moved to continue his search for Inara. What he was going to say to her

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 20:33
Very nice, love the M/I interaction! Cuteness. I also like River playing with Jayne, and how you've changed the characters because of what happened on Miranda. More, more!
Friday, 24 March 2006 20:40
lmfao,

“Come now, I ain't touched everything,” Mal said defensively. They both froze for a millisecond, realizing what he'd just said. “Anyway-”

ahha, insert foot into mouth, dear Mal, foot into mouth.

I really like this!
Friday, 24 March 2006 21:20
Okay, love how you are having Inara and Mal stumbling closer but very frustrating that they keep see sawing. Can't wait to see what happens next. And oh, Patience shot Mal twice. The last time she winged him which is why he shot her horse out from under her. Back at the ship Simon offered to look at the wound for him and Mal said it was just scratch. Keep Flyin', Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 21:27
Her pirate. But he wasn't hers, not really. The girls didn't know that, though. Maybe that was why she had been able to survive there. She'd been able to cloak herself in their rumors, in the belief that she was some sort of romantic figure. Pretend that Mal was... well, hers.
-nice insight there

“Come now, I ain't touched everything,” Mal said defensively. They both froze for a millisecond, realizing what he'd just said. “Anyway-”
-oh, that's just perfect....

~kaynara
Friday, 24 March 2006 21:35
Thanks, Amdobell- I forgot about Patience winging Mal... oh well, it doesn't really count if it was 'just a scratch'... oops... :)
Saturday, 25 March 2006 01:20
Ur doin a kick-ass job, albatross. Keep it up
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 March 2006 02:07
Nice! seriously! I love this, i love that you made him play with her things, its just perfect Mal bahavior. oh and the way you wrote Inaras thoughts and truths, well all in all good job just kinda have me wishing it was longer but its not your fault you write so well.- OS1987
Saturday, 25 March 2006 03:57
Dear Buddha, please bring me pony and more Mal/Inara goodness. Fun and great interactions. Keep it up!
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Saturday, 25 March 2006 04:09
beauty in every way
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 March 2006 05:06
aww love the Mal/Inara...they are so fun when they are flustered, lol. Can't wait for more!

~K
Saturday, 25 March 2006 08:40
Very good. I'm enjoying this. Are you going to teach us dear readers the buttercup song?
Saturday, 25 March 2006 12:34
Another good chapter, I liked Inara & Mal's total clumsiness together!
Saturday, 25 March 2006 16:05
wow... this is very very good!! I likes it... I likes it ALOT! lol, Keep it comeing M8!! :P

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