Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Finding Common Ground...Ch.3

Thursday, March 23, 2006

The story continues as Mal learns about his new job and the Mule gets its revenge. (still M/I but we need the job, people)

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Chapter 3: Revenge of the Mule

"I'm not going with you, sir."

Zoë's soft voice surprised him enough that Mal lifted his head quickly and was quickly rewarded with a resounding bang against the undercarriage of the mule. There was an explosion of sparks before his eyes and slapped a hand over his forehead and nose.

"Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze fuh ur-tze! " Mal cursed as he rolled from underneath the hot mule. Zoë watched him with a mixture of amusement and concern as he staggered to his feet, still holding his forehead and covering his eyes. " Ai ya! Zoë! What in God's name are you playin' at!"

"Sorry, sir, I didn't mean to startle you."

"You didn't startle me. I heard you a mile away."

Zoë arched an eyebrow at him. "And that smack is telling me differently. What were you thinking about? I called your name a few times."

"I wasn't thinkin' about a damned thing," Mal grunted as he threw the gloves he had been wearing to one side. Zoë's eyes went to his forehead and she bit her lip in amusement.

"Of course you weren't."

Mal turned the hover mule off and stared at the vehicle. Lord blessed Kaylee, he thought, the day she decided to fix 'er up. Then, Zoë's words reverberated through his head and he turned to see his first mate still standing to one side, her arms crossed over her chest.

"What? Zoë, I'd thought you would have enjoyed comin' on a potential job run," he said as he rubbed at his head.

"Normally I would love nothing better than to see you and Jayne pull serious faces and try to be all manner of intimidating," Zoë said dryly, "but I need some time alone. I want to go to the med center and then to buy some things with my savings."

Mal raked his eyes up and down Zoë critically. "You don't look sick. Simon could check you out real fast..."

"I don't want Simon to check me out," Zoë snapped. Her tone, irritable and tired, made Mal look at her eyes. "I have some things I need to be sure of."

They stood in silence fo

Comments
Thursday, 23 March 2006 20:15
Awwwwwwww, yay! So quickly come the new parts!

That moment between Mal and Zoe was lovely. Nothing overt, very matter of fact but so very heartfelt. And funny!

Then the Mal/Inara, funny and hot - great combo! I mean... rowr!


Plus plot! Plot = happiness. I enjoyed Benjamin's character and River's entire part in this. You really captured that child-like, tender brat that she is. :)

Can't wait to see what this storm is shaping up to...
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 March 2006 20:23
Aw, poor Mal's head in the beginning! But really good, can't wait for the next part...
Thursday, 23 March 2006 21:24
You got me with the plot, I'm hooked!

Love the Mal/Inara with the bumped head. Silly man, getting comforted after he hurt himself! Too funny.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 02:31
aww loved the Mal/Inara and I love the job! Cant wait for more!
2X2
Friday, 24 March 2006 02:46
Oh, Mal's head!!! I've had days like that, I can sympathize... of course, I haven't had a beautiful woman like Inara looking into my eyes afterward, making my blood roar an' all, but I can imagine that part ... hmmm think I'm a' gonna hafta head to my bunk shortly... ahem...

ANYway... great part, love the character interaction, and an intriguing contact at the end there... exciting!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 21:43
"Did you just compliment me?" Inara asked, dumbfounded. Mal ran his hand through his hair and shrugged.

"Yeah well, don't let it go to your head. That was my once-a-year occurrence to help your self-esteem out," Mal said. "Be careful. We'll be back, if all goes well, in about two hours or so."

-very cute character interaction in this one!
~kaynara
Saturday, 25 March 2006 02:25
good job
MCK
Friday, 14 April 2006 18:30
I am lovin this. Please don't stop. You have nicely tied up ends, moved the story along yet stayed true to character voices. Thanks for not going too fast.
McK
Thursday, 04 May 2006 19:45
Great Mal and Inara. Please keep writing, you have a great knack for thier character voices.

More?
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 11:01
yee-har, we gots us some plot!!! and still keeping with the mal/inara goodness!!

b
Thursday, 08 June 2006 22:24
Well now...wonder if Mal would be up for banging his head more often if he got comforted by Inara every single time;)

Great stuff so far, Szyg! Just loving the Mal/Inara tension, and I almost blew a gut laughing at some of the witty comments flung around by the various characters:D

BEB
Monday, 12 June 2006 19:40
A very nice Mal/Inara scene here... although as a M/I shipper I am slightly biased!

Also, who doesn't love gun-runners!
Tuesday, 31 July 2007 16:44
Yay! More plot, new characters that read true to the series, and a visit to Persephone. I can almost smell the good dogs cookin' on the grill. More please!
KK
Monday, 30 June 2008 03:27
Very nice, though I see I'm two years late! :) Am I missing the rest, or did you end it here?

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