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Finding Common Ground Ch.5

Wednesday, June 7, 2006

Inara reveals her ability to act but the results are awkward and painful

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Chapter 5: Lack of Appreciation

Mal leaned back out of the way, pulling Inara along with him underneath the scaffolding. She muttered beneath her breath about never having a peaceful day of shopping with him as they walked down the street, narrowly dodging street carts and pedestrians struggling to get home before the downpour. Already there had been a few streaks of lightening across the sky and the rain was cold.

Involuntarily, Inara trembled and tucked herself closer to Mal's side. He glanced down at her as he squeezed her hand in his and led her to another alleyway. He was of half-a-mind to simply race back to the docks to Serenity but didn't like the thought of whoever was following them getting there as well. Best keep this as low radar as possible. All he needed was to get the rest of the crew shot at and Simon complaining about the work...not that the boy ever did but Mal figured he was inclinded to.

He pressed Inara into the rough wood siding and heard her suddenly gasp as he invaded her space. Ignoring the tight quarters, he was perfectly content with pressing up against her. Long as this didn't last long, she'd never know the effects of it.

"You alright?"

" Wo hao ," she murmured. "What are we doing here?"

"Just inclined to see who's following us, if you catch my drift."

Inara rolled her eyes before lifting her hand to see that was coated in dirt and brown paint. Her back, she realised, felt soaked by something oily. "Mal..." she suddenly whispered, "If we get back to Serenity and you aren't injured...I am going to hurt you."

Mal, whose attention had been away from her, looked down at her hand and blinked. "Oh, sorry."

"Sorry doesn't cut it. I liked this dress," she ground out as she tried to shove him off of her. Mal jerked her back and pressed her against the wall.

"Gorram it, woman, use some sense," he said just as thunder rumbled. "I like the dress too but stop moving." Inara focussed her large brown eyes on him, struggling to keep calm as he continued t

Comments
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 02:26
Love Kaylee and Inara's 'gossiping' and mal catching them laughing and guessing correctly about who they were laughing at.

Leave it to Mal and Inara to always have a spat or three. I much prefer them when they're fighting - don't know why!

I hope we get to see the 'talk' Inara has with Simon.

And the possibility of picking up passengers could open up a wholleee new big can of worms. Looking forward to what happens next. Well done.
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 03:48
Okay, Mal and Inara need to get over their gorram pride and kiss or somethin'! And if not that, can they at least try and be civil? Why must Mal always revert to calling her a whore? Especially after she saved his sorry pi gu ... again!

However, Kaylee and Inara's interaction was great - I too would love to see what kind of sense Inara talks into Simon, although a little romance to go with the hot lovin' will pretty much make him irresistible ... not that he ain't already. Really great chapter, please post again soon, I'm digging this series!
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 16:35
Oh what a prickly relationship Inara and Mal have, even when the Captain wants to put things right he can't seem to open his gorram mouth without putting his foot in it where she is concerned. And he smiles about Simon! I am hoping somebody knocks some sense into those two so they can get down to some sweet loving and Kaylee won't have to pick her words around them any more.
And how long has there been a price on Mal's head? I always thought the wanted fugitives were Simon and River? Great writing, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 08 June 2006 22:53
Well...things are getting back into their old flow pattern, aren't they? Cuz the Mal/Inara dance seems awfully familiar;)

I am really enjoying this series, Syzg. Especially the arguments, cuz they reveal a lot of what each of them is thinking about and raising more than one good point.

BEB
Monday, 12 June 2006 20:01
Why do the chapters I enjoy always feel so short?

Another great instalment with the obligatory 'I really want to slap Mal' moment.

Thanks

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