“I have it in full mind that you cheated,” Mal snapped as he watched Jayne take the pot of bullets to his side of the low table they had set up. Jayne grinned crookedly and shrugged, squinting at the sunlight that was coming through the open cargo hatch.
“Some of us have skill, and some of us don’t. Ain’t nothing special about it,” the mercenary answered.
Mal rolled his eyes and began to shuffle again. “That’s one of the bigger loads of gou pi you’ve given.”
Jayne began to count his bullets again, eyeing Mal’s somewhat larger pile with greed. “Figure Zoë and Wash are having a good time?” The couple had gone into the city core to sell the crew’s recent take and then go to something Wash had been near giddy over. An exhibit of some sort of bones from Earth-That-Was some rich fella had smuggled in.
“Zoë seemed less impressed by Wash’s plans,” Mal commented. He heard the rustle of movement of Persephone’s Albionette port outside and wondered when Kaylee would finally get the parts so they could get gone. They weren’t likely to find any renters here for either passage or for the shuttles.
“Ever gonna tell me what a woman like that sees in that guy?”
“Nope. It would get all-confusin’ for you and I’ve seen your face after I confuse you. It ain’t pretty,” the captain said as he dealt the five cards out.
“My Mama says I’m more of a cunning-looker,” Jayne protested.
“In other words, she didn’t want to hurt you by callin’ you ugly?”
Jayne didn’t answer, his dark head bent as he looked over his cards with a sly grin. Mal kept his eyes on him, not trusting him even when it came to card playing. One thing him and the others were mindful of.
“I’ll bet five,” Jayne said as he put five bullets in the pile. Mal turned his eyes back to his cards uneasily, glancing at the bullets. They were five from one of Jayne’s favourite guns, meaning that the man had a good hand. Or was bluffing a hell lot more than normal. Jayne watched Mal’s face pull into a frown and snorted. “Come on now, I ain’t got all da
:“Captain Reynolds, I assume?” At his nod, she gave a half smile before glancing at Jayne’s turned back. “And his trained…watch-dog?”
Mal snorted. “Trained? Jayne’s barely house-broke, Miss…?”" - Loved that little exchange.
I like how intelligent Inara is in this story. Even though she's from the core, its clear that she is a bit world weary. She doesn't have many delusions about the verse, knows what's what. And I loved Mal's reaction to her.
I enjoyed the exchanges between Inara and Mal... I liked tha she had her own reaction to Mal too... She was just as affected in her way as he was to her...
great!
You can't take the sky from me
Thanks for posting, I can never get enough of Mal and Inara. :)
Jenn
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y'all want more? that was a one shot wonder...lol...maybe i should dust off my other mal/inara i keep secreted away on my harddrive :-P
"Yeah right, he thought to himself, and I’m likely to get married."
--poor Mal. if he only knew...
Awwww, thanks, Syzg. You totally made my night! Browncoats rock, seriously. And this story is all manner of adorable. Write more, k? We can never have too much M/I.
<3 Kaynara
This was great...the little comment about the look, "as if he had just run over a favourite puppy" really made me smile.
Thanks
Taya
~K
-reaverman (security system STILL not letting me log in!)
Gorgeous writing with a wonderful mood and really spot-on entertaining dialogue. I can so easily see this as canon. Downright perfect. *G*
A real treat! I love your handle on the characters!
Hmm, maybe I should continue this one but I had this whole epic-like fic planned...epic being more than one chapter... my standards of epics ain't high, eh?
Browncoat2006, I think everyone here would cheer you on for making the effort to write! Go for it!
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Jayne choked on his liquor and shot Mal a dirty look. “Don’t matter how long I’m on this boat and how much time I spend playin' with Lil' Jayne, I ain’t playin with that side o’ the fence, Mal.”
Hilarious
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