Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

A Start of Things

Monday, March 20, 2006

Set prior to the pilot (but based off Out of Gas). Mal and Inara meet for the first time

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4672    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“I have it in full mind that you cheated,” Mal snapped as he watched Jayne take the pot of bullets to his side of the low table they had set up. Jayne grinned crookedly and shrugged, squinting at the sunlight that was coming through the open cargo hatch.

“Some of us have skill, and some of us don’t. Ain’t nothing special about it,” the mercenary answered.

Mal rolled his eyes and began to shuffle again. “That’s one of the bigger loads of gou pi you’ve given.”

Jayne began to count his bullets again, eyeing Mal’s somewhat larger pile with greed. “Figure Zoë and Wash are having a good time?” The couple had gone into the city core to sell the crew’s recent take and then go to something Wash had been near giddy over. An exhibit of some sort of bones from Earth-That-Was some rich fella had smuggled in.

“Zoë seemed less impressed by Wash’s plans,” Mal commented. He heard the rustle of movement of Persephone’s Albionette port outside and wondered when Kaylee would finally get the parts so they could get gone. They weren’t likely to find any renters here for either passage or for the shuttles.

“Ever gonna tell me what a woman like that sees in that guy?”

“Nope. It would get all-confusin’ for you and I’ve seen your face after I confuse you. It ain’t pretty,” the captain said as he dealt the five cards out.

“My Mama says I’m more of a cunning-looker,” Jayne protested.

“In other words, she didn’t want to hurt you by callin’ you ugly?”

Jayne didn’t answer, his dark head bent as he looked over his cards with a sly grin. Mal kept his eyes on him, not trusting him even when it came to card playing. One thing him and the others were mindful of.

“I’ll bet five,” Jayne said as he put five bullets in the pile. Mal turned his eyes back to his cards uneasily, glancing at the bullets. They were five from one of Jayne’s favourite guns, meaning that the man had a good hand. Or was bluffing a hell lot more than normal. Jayne watched Mal’s face pull into a frown and snorted. “Come on now, I ain’t got all da

Comments
Monday, 20 March 2006 23:05
Wow -- What a good day for M/I! This was a fun fic. I loved the beginning with Mal and Jayne, betting over bullets. And lil' Jayne... he would be so egotistical, wouldn't he?

:“Captain Reynolds, I assume?” At his nod, she gave a half smile before glancing at Jayne’s turned back. “And his trained…watch-dog?”

Mal snorted. “Trained? Jayne’s barely house-broke, Miss…?”" - Loved that little exchange.

I like how intelligent Inara is in this story. Even though she's from the core, its clear that she is a bit world weary. She doesn't have many delusions about the verse, knows what's what. And I loved Mal's reaction to her.
2X2
Monday, 20 March 2006 23:32
Yay! Mal and Inara! Hooray to Kaynara for askin' for it, and hooray for Szyg for writin' and postin' it!

I enjoyed the exchanges between Inara and Mal... I liked tha she had her own reaction to Mal too... She was just as affected in her way as he was to her...

great!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 00:39
This is a good start, there will be more though - right? Jayne was very funny and the pull and push of Mal and Inara's first meeting was excellent. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 00:52
I loved this. It's a wonderful first meeting. The interactions were great, and I all but spit my soda all over the puter screen with the Lil' Jayne comment. (I suddenly heard Lil' Kaylee and Lil' Albatross in my mind and got a totally different mental picture for those names. eek!! LOL)

Thanks for posting, I can never get enough of Mal and Inara. :)

Jenn
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 03:35
Man, thanks for the reviews, guys. I sat staring at my screen for about ten minutes before i hit the submit fanfic button. a bit nerve-wracking for my first firefly fic.
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y'all want more? that was a one shot wonder...lol...maybe i should dust off my other mal/inara i keep secreted away on my harddrive :-P
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 05:57
“Just checkin, Jayne,” Mal said before he blinked. "You named your...your...after yourself?"

"Yeah right, he thought to himself, and I’m likely to get married."
--poor Mal. if he only knew...

Awwww, thanks, Syzg. You totally made my night! Browncoats rock, seriously. And this story is all manner of adorable. Write more, k? We can never have too much M/I.

<3 Kaynara
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 11:43
Seriously... If you have more of these gathering dust then post them!

This was great...the little comment about the look, "as if he had just run over a favourite puppy" really made me smile.

Thanks
Taya
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 14:32
Aww yay! Loved it! And you have more Mal/Inara lying around????? POST!!!! lol

~K
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 16:34
HA! Lil' Jayne! ROFL! I loved Mal's speechless reaction. You should do some more about Inara gettin' aquainted with their work and the rest of the crew. Keep it up!
-reaverman (security system STILL not letting me log in!)
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 20:56
Ah, I read this yesterday and forgot to comment. Bad me!

Gorgeous writing with a wonderful mood and really spot-on entertaining dialogue. I can so easily see this as canon. Downright perfect. *G*

A real treat! I love your handle on the characters!
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 03:58
I <3 Mal/Inara writins... lol sorry I just do, been searching through all of 'em today and reading everybodys, and just happen to be tacking more favorite authors into my list... including you, and not just cause of the whole Mal/Inara bit that Im so obssesed with, just because of the writing, you all do it so damn well... I LOVE ALL MY AUTHOR TYPE PEEPS :D god I wish I could write fics half so good.... thinkin of mabey trying to start one up some day... plz be nice everybody?? lol
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 04:11
Thanks everyone!

Hmm, maybe I should continue this one but I had this whole epic-like fic planned...epic being more than one chapter... my standards of epics ain't high, eh?

Browncoat2006, I think everyone here would cheer you on for making the effort to write! Go for it!

Sunday, 28 May 2006 15:48
hehe...i'm having trouble deciding who's the bigger bitch: inara or mal? right now i'm leaning towards the captain

b
Thursday, 15 June 2006 09:40
Really enjoyed this

Jayne choked on his liquor and shot Mal a dirty look. “Don’t matter how long I’m on this boat and how much time I spend playin' with Lil' Jayne, I ain’t playin with that side o’ the fence, Mal.”

Hilarious

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