Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Thinking things through part thirteen

Monday, March 20, 2006

Jayne and Simon do some thinking

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3211    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Leavin’ Kaylee there in that state was the hardest thing he’d ever done. He could still feel her lips on his throat and couldn’t get the image of her out of his mind; skin flushed all rosy, glowin’ eyes drenched with tears, nipples pointin’ right at him. The ragin’ hunger in his belly was still there at dinner time and if Kaylee had smiled at him he woulda been down on his knees beggin’ her to choose him. Instead she glared at him till he glared back and left the table his stomach churnin’.

The moment Serenity landed and the cargo bay door opened Jayne was outta there. He wasn’t gonna stand round and watch Kaylee and the doc go off together. He’d had ‘bout all he could stand of the wantin’ and needin’. He was goin’ to the nearest whorehouse, get his brains screwed out and forget his desire for Kaylee.

‘Cept it didn’t work that way, he’d stepped through the door of the whorehouse expectin’ the sort of homey feelin’ he usually got and just felt disappointed.

‘Cause his home was Serenity now; and though there was plenty of women, some of ‘em real hot and ready for the takin’, for the first time in his life he just weren’t interested. ‘Cause none of them was her, none of ‘em were as argumentative, as stubborn, as beautiful, as clever or as maddeningly sexy as his Kaylee.

There was no point him stayin’ so Jayne headed back to the ship to wait for Kaylee and make sure that Simon had treated her right.

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Simon was exhausted. He had spent over an hour searching the streets for Kaylee. He was so concerned for her. His search was made difficult by the fact that the whole population appeared to be rioting and he had to avoid them while looking for the girl.

He knew he should go back to Serenity and alert the Captain but frankly he was worried about how the man would react.

Simon knew what Jayne’s reaction would be. He hardly thought that losing Kaylee in the middle of a riot qualified as ‘treating her right’. In this case the mercenary would be right to despise and hate

Comments
Monday, 20 March 2006 07:53
TEASE!!!

Yes, that's right. *tease*

Go, go write more. I'll just sit here and wait.
Monday, 20 March 2006 09:21
I'm with Jacqui. Think we'll have ourselves a nice little sit-in protest.
*waves placard reading 'WRITE MORE'*

Seriously, leaving it there was just plain mean. You can make it up to me by having Jayne shoot Simon. Pretty please with a strawberry on top?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 10:41
This was very good and I am all kinds of concerned about Kaylee, especially with some of those ships leaving in a gorram hurrying what with the rioting and all. Hope our girl isn't in one of them. I also don't envy Simon explaining how he lost her. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 20 March 2006 15:07
Uh oh!

Simon, you putz!
Monday, 20 March 2006 17:51
More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More...... Pretty Please, with a cherry on top??!!

We've gotta know what is gonna do now that Simon hasn't looked after her properly....

Please say that Jayne is going to march out of there and find her, pretty damn quick!

Come on, Kaylee! Put that prissy Doc behind you, and go get yourself a REAL man....... Jayne's longing for you something fierce......


Monday, 20 March 2006 18:45
excellent but in the interest of giving Jacqui a taste of her own medicine >;D please hold off a week or so before posting another. Then start something equally wonderful and don't update that, then start a third fantastic series and when we are really and truly wound up and off our feed....drop us a drabble about the very first. I am so going to get lynched for this :D
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 22:23
I loved it! Now gimme more!
I just gotta know what's happening next.

Oh, and I completely agree with Zoesbackup. That'll teach her... :^P

ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 23:25
I'm so loving this fic, but the teeny tiny chapters are torture! More! More! More! Um, please?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 23:45
*waving another placard WRITE MORE* please!!!

Ravenhair
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 05:46
As shiny as ever.
Keep 'em coming- just make sure that nothing happens to lil Kaylee.
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 20:57
Come on, what a way to end it. please write more. i'm begging you.
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Sunday, 26 March 2006 09:38
What was that?????

As usual it was Phenominal but it was WAY to gorram short!
PLEASE write more soon!!!!
I beg of you!


I see some pain in Simon's future!
Once they find Kaylee I think Jayne just might loose it.
I do, I do!!
WINTERHART
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 03:12
Been rereading these, all in a row...I can't wait to see how it turns out!


I'm with Jacqui...*joins the sit-in protest.* Not leavin' 'til there's more story...nope, I ain't.

Sunday, 23 April 2006 17:20
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!

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