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Learning to be Patient- Chapter 4

Monday, March 20, 2006

Serenity has taken a job on Tempest, known for its luxury, but also for a seedy underworld that the Alliance can't seem to control. Mal has a bad feeling about the place, but what happens when what he's not expecting becomes reality? Takes place a year after BDM. Simon/Kaylee with eventual Mal/Inara and River/Jayne.

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Author’s Note: You guys were rather accepting of the last chapter, and I thank you for that. To clear up something, the first seperation in the chapter (these ~*~*~*~) is a flashback. It was originally in italics, but that was lost during the transfer. This is my favorite chapter so far because it’s got a little bit of everything in it. Thanks for commenting, and stick with me, because the next chapter is going to be awesome.

Disclaimer: I do not own Firefly/Serenity, nor any of the characters or events that compose them. And if I did, I would be fired for never updating and they would be given to someone more worthy anyways.

Learning to be Patient

Chapter 4

Comfort

His eyes burned as he watched her vitals bleep across the monitor once again. They were steady, but she still lay unconscious before him in the infirmary. Her face was bruised, but the swelling had slowly decreased over the past two days. He’d cleaned the gashes across her chest and stitched together the skin where it needed to be. She hadn’t moved during the entire process.

“She still hasn’t woken up?” a voice called to him.

He turned to find Inara standing inside the doorway. She smiled ruefully at him as she walked inside the darkened room, “Zoë cooked supper. River and I grappled a plate of food away from Jayne for you. If you’d like to go eat, I’ll stay with her,” she offered kindly, as she adjusted the shawl that was draped over her shoulders.

He shook his head silently, “I don’t want to leave,” he told her softly, “If I leave and she wakes up,” he paused and looked to Kaylee’s form. With his face hidden he added, “I don’t want to fail her a second time.”

“Simon,” Inara began softly, as she knelt beside him, placing a gentle hand on his shoulder, “You didn’t fail her in anyway. Kaylee can be very stubborn at times; she wouldn’t have let you follow her even if you tried.”

“I could’ve just taken her out like we’d planned,” he argued. He placed a hand over his mouth worriedly.

“Then when the Reavers att

Comments
Monday, 20 March 2006 05:22
Kaylee's awake! YAY! I love the flashback, it was very sweet. Can't wait to read your next post! :D
Monday, 20 March 2006 05:36
Ohh, very nice. Glad Kaylee's awake. Afraid she's gonna be a little spooked for a while now that she's come face to flesh with a Reaver and lived to tell the tale. But Simon will be there for her.

The flashback was just lovely.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Monday, 20 March 2006 06:54
I just discovered this fic tonight. It's good so far. I like the way that you use River in the piece. Also, Kudos for having Kaylee wake up in this chapter instead of dragging it out over chapters and chapters... so many people do that (in several fandoms) and it works .5% of the time... but I digress.

I like how you have a good understand of who does what, and how they do it. Simon is obsessive and tries to fix. Jayne says that practical thing that no one else wants to deal with (saying they should leave Kaylee). Inara is the caretaker (getting Simon food, coloring with River). Mal tries to pass his concern for other human beings off as selfish concern of money. Zoe interprets Mal's behavior, always sees throught he BS (I'd love to see more of her in the fic; people sometimes forget about Zoe). Kaylee is a ray of sunshine, so vulnerable but so uncompromisingly herself at once. River is full or pre-mature wisdom that no one quite understands. Lovely.
Monday, 20 March 2006 08:25
I can see why you like this chapter...I do too!

The flashback was great, seemed to flow well within the fic.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Monday, 20 March 2006 10:11
So happy to know that Kaylee is going to be alright but my favourite part was the description of Serenity having bits dropping off her like leprosy. Maybe not poetical but a fantastic description. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 11:42
welcome back, kaylee!!

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