Ch 6
Mal skipped up the stairs to the bridge, throwing his jacket over his shoulders. Zoe threw him a look. “Skipping, sir?” she asked flatly.
“Job went smooth. That kinda thing don’t happen too often. Makes me downright giddy,” Mal said, knowing that he hadn’t fooled her for a second. Zoe knew him well. Too well, at times, for his liking. And though the named Inara Serra would not escape her lips, Mal knew that Zoe knew that the job going well didn’t make him skip. Smiling, he quickly sat down in the pilot’s seat. “Where’s Wash?” he asked, noticing for the first time that the usual occupant of the pilot’s seat wasn’t there.
“He decided to turn in early. River gave him a bit of a scare. Truth be told, sir, she gave us all a bit of a scare.”
Mal didn’t like the tone of Zoe’s voice. She was looking at him, brown eyes solid as the earth. Zoe was a soldier, through and through. She had her mind in the job. Seeing her eyes brought out the same in Mal. Thoughts of Inara were put on hold. He met her gaze. “Go on,” he said. He was not smiling anymore.
“Seems that while she slipped away from Wash and found her way right inside of town hall,” Zoe told him calmly. “Knocked out two alliance guards – might have even killed them – on her way into the catacombs.”
“Gū niang jiāng huì cuī cán wǒ,” Mal muttered.
Zoe shook her head. “That’s not the way of it,” she said, leaning forward. “That map your girl gave us? It wasn’t right. River hadn’t come, Jayne and I would have been stranded in that place. Alliance would have come, job would have been over mighty fast. Sir, she saved us all.”
Mal leaned back in his chair. “Huh,” he muttered softly. River… His life had certainly changed since she’d entered it. It was hard, some times, sorting out his feelings for the girl. On one hand, he was genuinely fond of her. River, underneath all the craziness and whatnot, had a kind disposition to her. Mal could appreciate that. On the other hand, she was full of all that craziness and… and what
In fact, this entire part had me sooo happy, it's perfect!
Zoe and River's moment is perfect. Pragmatism and the undefinable, head to head. I loved it.
Inara and Abbadon -- GOD, the essence of delirious young love, it brought tears to my eyes it was so sweet and overhung by future shadows. Really beautiful!
And then the ultimate in heartbreak... Such subtle and yet obvious ways that they hurt each other. The initial joy, the way she can observe Mal so closely and still not quite get him - but enough to hurt them both.
"There was an incredible power within her. She saw a million futures reflected in his blue eyes. She blinked and felt them pass away."
Gorgeously written.
I'm thrilled with the way you are writing Inara in this series, the way you let her be so independent and how you highlight the way that Mal and Serenity are big factors in her life but not the only ones. She has huge landscapes of past and present that do not touch them and they affect her just as much.
Gah. I just adore this series. Cannot wait for the next part.
I ache every time I read the pain between Inara and Mal... (that's a good thing, though) So much fear keeping them locked into the same patterns, over and over. Show some joy in each other, then become frightened and wary, then wound in defense, then attack in retaliation, letting the resentment burn the joy away again.... so sad and tragic these two... how I love them. And this story! And I love your insight into Inara and how you portray her here. Inara is such a complex and complicated character for one who doesn't like complications :o) and your writing of her just reminds me more and more of why I love her so much.
Thanks for this! Can't wait for more (Please please please before the end of the month <g>)
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